История хорошая спасибо!!!было бы более здорово если обновление было бы часто. Я только сегодня начал читать если обновления часто или недавно загрузили свою работу то тогда извините и все!!!!.
This is a shameless reader given his absolute support to one of his most favourite authors keep up the great work you do and don’t over exert yourself.
✍️I really like it....................
A wonderful content. A fantasy novel.Need more romance.(Ricol and Jake❤) my fav. And also John ?. Three stars (Ricol⭐️Jake ⭐️John ⭐️).
This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments
i honestly think the author is high. so far I've read several chapters and from what I've seen the mc should be formidable but I'm seeing is him taking insults left and right. what part of that is formidable. for a man that's served 6 years in the military he sure is a coward. authors like these are hypocritical and honestly just copy a story and somehow make it worse
Sadly, just another virtual game novel with a simple minded MC and OP skill. Somehow a system is also pulled out of the author's behind to conveniently explain the MCs OP skill. Not worth your time.
MC sounds like a super masochist!!
This will and already has devolved into an endless series of deus ex machina to fish the MC out of situations that such an easily observed system will create. Let a cultivation novel be either low key, a steady progression, a power trip, or a fight against the heavens. There isn't really room for anything else.
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Talentless writer who has managed to craft one of the most mindnumbingly boring and repetitive stories you'll ever see.
Do yourself a favor and look elsewhere.
Need a rewriting but for the rest it is quit good.