"Azure Dragon God's Punch!" Kibo shouted while he threw out his fist, a giant depiction of the Azure Dragon roared out as a solid body of Origin Energy slammed into Vegeta sending him flying.
Location: Polýtimos Palace
The sense of danger in the air was feeling restless.
It was another airship in the horizon that make the people excited. It still quite far away nobody sure about its shape, but it is certainly an airship. Seeing the trajectory that airship is moving to the same destination as theirs.
Amazing!, however theres a personal problem for me. The mc repeatedly conplains yet doesnt do anything about a lot of personal things. The entire world thinks that he likes little boys, so he acts "mad" then doesnt do anything about it. He will complain about a huminoid creep who r*pes animals of the same gender, yet still travel happily with him.I really live it but im stopping at chapter80. This gay bs is getting old, its fine to have gay characters i dont care, its fine to make it comedy, but its annoying to have it come up again and again as if its some bad thing that the mc hates, but he just acts like some fkd up tsundere and fakes "disgust" and "anger" it ruins the story for me. Its the same thing with him complaining about being virgin yet running away from girls affections.
The concept is really good, but the writing quality is kinda messy. You need an editor author.
Or so he would have wanted.
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The story is amazing, this power system is different and unique, makes me like it a lot, almost makes me want to write something similar, but credit is where credit is due, and nice job, I will be waiting for the next upcoming chapters keep up the good work!
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Wowww a very unique write up!!!Keep it up!