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I wish I could rate more. Vampires Coffin brought me to Webnovel and I must confess, it's worth it...
very disappointed, shadow slave has an amazing start and the main character we are introduced to is a cunning, smart person that doesn't even hestitate to poisen seemingly "innocent" people for his safety, paired with good side characters and an interesting world it would seem like it's going to be great, right?wrong. Everything you've just read gets thrown away and wasted, the main character isn't cunning (you can be cunning without lying), smart or anything anymore. Character development is random and when it's announced to happen ("beach" episode) doesn't happen and overall Sunny disappoints in every aspect.you would think that he fights against the spell and avoid being a slave? nope, he becomes the slave of someone and that's it.. he's a slave, the novel lost its uniqueness at that point and I dropped it after trying to read further, spoiler; it doesn't get better.
raw..........pls........ .. . . . . . ..
I liked Zhen, his character seemed believable, and you could relate to him pretty often, but lacked emotion in places. The story itself is interesting and engaging, compared to other wn novels this one is above average. The author manages to give the chapters cliffhangers that make you want to scroll down and read on.There were also some questionable parts, I will not spoil the fun but make you read it for yourself to understand what I was talking about.The grammar was fine, the paragraphs not too long and the chapter length comfortable to read. I can’t give you 5 stars because not a single novel is worthy. ?? Meow ?u200d⬛
I'm a man of culture and even I feel creeped out of the extent the author's imagination.
Nice bro.you r doing great.I'm just waiting for ur next chapter.I hope u have a good pacing on this story.Cause its already looking interesting
Frankly nothing extraordinary, it's not bad but nothing convincing (I imagine that it is the author who deletes the bad comments...). Coincidences to no longer want, horrific timings, a story that evolves according to the problems of the women of the MC. Woman who by the way can no longer be counted, well you're going to tell me, maybe there has to be one more each time otherwise the story couldn't move forward... No seriously too much, it's just too much.If I could say the only positive point that made me reach chapter 173, it was the personality of the mc that I liked, even if very far from being perfect, we are painted a fairly intelligent personality, so that at the end up doing actions without too much sense.Read it if you just don't want to worry.
Perona[8] (ペローナ, Perōna), surnommée "La Princesse Fantôme" (ゴーストプリンセス, Gōsuto Purinsesu) en référence à ses pouvoirs, était la chef des Animaux Zombies et de l'Embuscade des Zombies de Thriller Bark, avant la chute de Gecko Moria. Elle a été l'un des principaux antagonistes de l'Arc de Thriller Bark, étant donné qu'elle faisait partie du Quatuor Monstrueux avec le Docteur Hogback, Absalom et Gecko Moria.Elle est cependant devenue, pendant l'ellipse, une sorte d'alliée de l'équipage du Chapeau de Paille en aidant Roronoa Zoro sur l'île de Dracule Mihawk [9], et en leur permettant de quitter l'Archipel Sabaody.
First of all props for putting your story out there takes hard work to do that. now saying that , the story feels like it needs some major editing and proof reading. some of the sentences just dont make sense so wilr i say cheers for your work and story ideas, ima bow out on reading more of this. salute
Honestly this story is very good but the author is not consistent with the releases and it kinda makes you not want to read any of the stories
Honestly I really enjoyed this book sad that it didn't get picked to get translated i apparently need more characters to post this review hi