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A great story. The world background and plot are amazing. Highly recommend it to all readers to give it a read. Keep up the good work Author-kun
It’s a good relaxing read . It’s not some high quality adventure story with twist and turns, but a straight OP MC sight seeing your while farming enemies . Its very relaxing and good change of pace . Romance a little bit forced in 2 sentences and. It happening for more then that. Still I enjoy it . Good change .
It's a great book with a unique writing style, I definitely recommend others to read it
sorry I can't vote for this so Ehe hmmm so!yep going great
great book waiting for more chapters author keep working!
what a shitty novel this is..the plot hole are so wide.its more shitty than a typical Chinese urban novel
Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}
I'm a beginner but I hope that,you like it and hope to get your outmost help thank you
I like the way you wrote this story, I enjoyed it. You were good at describing the emotions and actions of the characters. I think the character development is good, keep improving! I hope you add more hooks in each chapter
The book has long chapters, as I like them and it takes into account the small details, the author has everything to be one of the best
A typical author review for you.Well..its my first Novel. So, please feel free to point out mistakes.
I'm really hoping this one keeps going. It's got a really original spin on the system that really makes it unique and funny. Well worth the read. It's well written and has a great flow.
