Bland characters
The ways the story depicted is lifeless
Like a old tv black and white cant feel anything
Has potential sadly the way the story narrated is lifeless
Author puffs up word count with putting characters whole stat multiple times per chapter. Has long drawn out sequences for no reason over multipe chapters.
This is what all books should look like. in just few chapters, you've managed to get my full attention. The tension and suspense is just breathtaking. Work of a genius. More grease ❤️❤️❤️
I really love this story!!
Btw, I tried to draw Jay and Lou. If ever you love, you can use it as cover or whatever. I'll try to do others ;)
Link for images: https://imgur.com/a/sj56AHk
I NEED MORE. PLEASE UPDATE!!! I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
best story....... ....... ................
I want to inform everyone that on December 31st, I will be rewriting the FIRST three Novels, ever wrote ad it will mark three years I have been on the platform and they will be available on Webnovel and Honeyfeed.
Love this story. Is innocent and very loving. Great job. I hope to get more frequent updates. In real life you get many couples as the main Fl and ML.
OMG SO AMAZING ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! ❤️ ❤️ Sorry for the caps but it really is amazing, ive read a lot of novels like this but this one takes the cake
Amazing set up for a story i really like it especially hayami who is my favourite character. Its also an amazing action with its balance of fights and comedy
good plot......and thx for the chapter....//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The story is good so far. Interesting plot. Only the grammar is abit confusing. Just abit but i still can understand it. I can’t comment to much im just a reader n i just read 2 chapter.. keep up the good work. Btw im a dude n kind of enjoy this kind of story.
Just the original... is it really there? I mean... existed?