I enjoy the story line a lot!!! Love the characters and thier stories. This story only needs a good strong edited pass through! I enjoy the story!
what do you all think would happen in next chapter?? guess? if you reach this far I really appreciate you all, what do you think about the story? tell in comments. or are you all enjoyed reading this?. Thanks for reading the novel. story is already completed & are available in both Paperback & Ebook version with worldwide distribution.if you all want to read the full version you can check it out on Amazon & Google Play Store.
It's going to be great book and believe me, you can see it from first chapter. Fantastic storyline and characters. Definetly worth of reading ?
The storyline got me...It's worth reading....
wow I've been searching for this story ty
ovbviously the best book i have ever read ....
Author kun plz do a mess release this novel is sooo good!!!
I went into this novel expecting another trash translated chinese novel, reading it just to waste time. But what I found is a really well written novel, with a VERY passionate author. Really refreshing to see, Cook replies to almost every comment explaining things, even the dumb ones lol.Either way, I really like the story and characters so far, they are well written and the leveling is a new interesting system to me.Only things I don’t really like abou the novel I somehow feel like the pacing is a little slow, and sometimes abilities and stuff gets explained in a little too much detail. But that’s just my preference because I need to focus because i wan’t to remember the skills and items completely lmao.Other than that, love the novel, the mc, his gf, and his friendship with Natalie. Also give us some more snu snu with Lily if you know what I mean lol. Don’t mind the details there lol
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
"Absolutely loved this book! The story pulls you in right away, and the characters feel so real. Really liked this! Definitely worth the read – keep up the great work!"But can you update the chapters Faster ?
Usually I try to give stories at least 100 chapters before giving up, however this story is an exception to the rule. Ppl said its much better later on, but I wish I could continue on. the beginning chapters are absolutely horrendous. The mc is not likeable, his actions make no sense. chapter 39 and being late is a perfect example. His friends are beyond annoying. with friends like that, who needs enemies. The world situation and humanity losing and dying, yet young masters can just go kill new recruits or whatever.... makes no sense. The system just sucks. It pretty much states, you continue swimming against the current or you die. I hate forced systems. The mc takes simp to the next lvl in beginning. that's the whole premise of the beginning and why he does things.
"Lord Light, what creature will you create this time?" Lilith asked.