Please update more chapters soon at (5) chapters instead of (1)
this book is amazing.. i hope u can create a book 2 from UNI.. to see how they will end up in life.. ...
The atmosphere in these chapters is INSANE and I need to talk about it. Let me start with the bridge scene because it's basically a movie frame: "The streetlights cast an orange-yellow filter over the world, but even so, it was clear the car wasn't the usual pale gray." That sentence does SO much work. It establishes the lighting, the mood, the fact that Yu Sibai's car is an anomaly in this corporate parking lot world, and it's doing all of that without any exposition. The author doesn't tell us Yu Sibai is different—we see it through the car's color against a sea of black, white, and gray vehicles. That's visual storytelling at its finest. Then the rain hits. "A large raindrop splashed onto the windshield—then more followed, rattling down like scattered marbles." I can literally hear that sound. And later when Ji Wenze gets caught in the downpour: "Two seconds later, when the hair at his forehead was soaked and hanging down, he smiled again." The image of this composed, powerful new president just... standing there getting rained on like a teenager in a music video, and then casually asking to borrow a car—it's cinematic in a way that makes me want to watch this as a drama immediately. The office itself is also doing a lot of worldbuilding. The break room gossip, the noise-canceling headphones that switch to transparency mode, the sunflower that gets delivered to the wrong office. These small details create a lived-in corporate environment that feels real. And the contrast between the fluorescent office lights outside and the orange-yellow streetlight filter—that's the author telling us this is a world where even the natural light has to compete with artificial illumination. Very on-the-nose but also very effective.
Very nice story, keep it up
I can't wait to read more chapters .........
Your book is unique dear author! keep it up! .........
Really good
Amazing start. Although some errors pop up here and there, its still an awesome read
Ohhhh.. finally they came to their senses!.. love it!
Highly recommended! 10/10!!
gripping story building into a fascinating crescendo. I can't wait for the rest
I completely love this story !
100% recommend!!!!
Read it!......