Once the man opened his mouth to reply Isai poked each of them with one finger and shocked them, making each of them yelp in both pain and surprise. "Ignore both of them. I wouldn't mind having you in my party, you did beat me fair and square after all, but I am also curious of our updated rankings after the fight."
I think the story is somewhat very not bad and
good stuff wish the author didn't stop....
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The “Epic of Caterpillar” is the only novel written by its author (PancakesWitch) on Webnovel. The MC is a reincarnated human male who died because of a fever. And he was incarnated into a caterpillar! As a previous Otaku he managed to discover that there is a system in this new world. The system is actually in control of the world and its inhabitants. Through his new life the protagonist embarks on a journey to empower himself by evolving with the help of the system. Gaining many strong companions while establishing a kingdom.The novel is heavily influenced by Japanese isekai webnovels, anime, and manga. I’ve noticed many similarities between EOC and many Japanese isekai novels like “Re: Monster; Monster reincarnation chronicle starting after being stabbed to death” by (Kanekiru Kogitsune), “That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime” by (Fuse), “The Death Mage Who Doesn’t Want a Fourth Time” by (Densuke), and “I'm A Spider, So What?” by (Baba Okina). The novel main structure is based on the novel “Re: Monster”. The analogy between the MC’s (Kireina) and (Rou) is very much the same. Both are always levelling up, evolving and gaining skills through devouring others. Acquiring tons of followers and obtaining wives and children’s. Doing all of this while building and expanding their own monsters’ kingdom. The only difference is the gender bending happened to the MC. Still I could not figure out the reason behind it or will it be something crucial later on in the future of events.In general the novel has its ups and downs but still captivating and entertaining. I always looking for what next to the MC and all of her followers and wives. Also how far can she expand the kingdom and what will be unfold in the relation with the higher beings. And who is controlling the system
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probably the most crring book I've ever read...like wow it was hard to even read...........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,l,,,,,,,,
The stakes in this section are absolutely insane and I need to process this. Let's start with Feng Qianqian's personal stakes—she's returned to a mansion that declared her dead, where her loyal servant has been tortured for a year, where the people who killed her (or at least covered it up) are still in power. She has NOTHING. No allies, no status, no recognition. And yet she's planning to walk back into that mansion TOMORROW and confront them all. That's either the bravest or most reckless thing I've ever read. The text says 'they want to earn a good reputation, but I'll make sure they're infamous instead'—she's not just seeking revenge, she's seeking to publicly dismantle their entire social standing. Then there's Nangong Li, the Prince, who's clearly a man with enemies and allies and a whole political world around him. Song Zhiyi's scheme with the aphrodisiac shows she's willing to cross lines that could get her killed if she'd been caught. The fact that he counter-manipulated her so perfectly—forcing her to drink the poison and arranging for her to end up with the coachman—demonstrates that he operates on a completely different level. This isn't a simple romance, this is a political thriller wrapped in a revenge story. And the Chancellor's conversation with Second Concubine Liu Ruyin raises the stakes for the ENTIRE household. We learn about Yunlang, the mad son who 'bites anyone he sees' and won't last more than a few days. We learn about the second son who's a gambler and drunkard. The family is rotting from the inside, and Feng Qianqian is walking back into this chaos. The question isn't just 'will she survive' anymore—it's 'can she save everyone who deserves saving while taking down everyone who doesn't?' And honestly, that's the kind of tension that makes you want to read until your eyes bleed.
Since every reviews is positive and I have nothing more positive to say I think I need to say the negative side to balance it out.My first issue with the early chapters was the numbers of characters being introduced. Readers will have a hard time to track each characters and I dont even think that it was necessary to name the organizer. Not to mention the characters also had alias characters in the game.Second the fight scenes lacked any weight on them, the members just cast skills without any explanation on how they will affacts their targets. In video game novels I've read they specify the attack damage and such and their description, well it does to some extent but its done rarely. I think it will leave the readers confused to add characters without proper introduction. Most of them wrre not even fleshed out I dont know which character were on which teams, or much of their personality the only one I could remember was Lidar.I find it odd in the championship, Aildren will just abandon the game because he felt something was off with his necklace, I mean his parents could be just somewhere though. I think it was a plot device that were not done very well. Because from what I read the news was declared after the Aildren was in as stupor. He should have prioritized the game first before the odd feeling on his necklace.Regarding the trials I didnt feel any tension the MC just casted the skills and.mobbed down the puppets. We have no idea how much skills he had, or how much mana he drained. I think i find that asoect a bit lacking. Also he did once almost felt some threat but he was saved by his father, and were able to cast a skill that killed them in an instant.The romance in this I think will feel will be somewhat forced, its onething to admire someone u treat as celebrity but with Aildren as he is now, I think it was too kind for the Landlady to even give him a free rent, she became those typical female side char who worships the MC.I think few chapters in, there was a development its a good thing, but I feel it was forced why he would turm into a complete unproductive neet just because his parents died. I would understand if his parents died because of him playing video games, that would give him a complete reason to stop, but I find no connection with it, they just went to get some grocery. You could say he was depressed thus he did all those stuffs but since he's a gamer shouldnt video games be his leeway to cure his depression? Not only that he also abandoned his team.Just my opinion, might be wrong IDK, dont take it heart since you asked for my honest opinion in the forum.