Jetboy76
nice work author, I am loving the story so far. looking forward for next book.
I have enjoyed reading the book so far. Great foundation!
Great work
novelnya bagus.
I missed reading them again.
I love the book but the only thing is that I’m having to wait weeks for one new chapter comes out but other than that I’m still enjoying reading this book
fantastic and consuming you wouldn't want to drop off
I wholeheartedly concur with Agathe's assessment. Her review effectively captures the essence of the story. In my preference for female leads, I appreciate strong, intelligent, and self-reliant characters who aren't overly invincible. It's appealing to see a central couple that relies on each other without becoming overly dependent. I prefer stories where characters evolve and gain wisdom, transcending the stereotypical reliance on physical confrontations.
The character development, however, feels minimal. The protagonist mainly focuses on managing her business, which limits her growth. Having skimmed through the first 86 chapters, where the action was mostly confined to backyard fights, I eventually lost interest and jumped ahead to around chapter 140, where the marriage plot unfolded and concluded the book. If you share my impatience, you might find yourself skipping similar sections, particularly during the early chapters.
It was good until I read the disgusting harem tag...
Truth hurts. People rude. I am addicted...
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Thanks for the story i liked it, Yes there where points where i thought damm come on now but overall wel written.
Sh*t bro I ain't touchin' this. They got that f*ck*n' brother complex tag too, yikes.
