PratapJi
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Want some more i think you got a great start of the story, you could ad some bad luck to the mc so that he get some change, in his go lucky attitud to his powers.
Pretty chilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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I really wish I could enjoy this story, but no the story is incredibly rushed and have no feeling to it, all characters are paper cutouts that have even less peronality than a Wuxia martial arts novel Combine that with 0 proof reading and the murder of the English language, it’s just a recipe for disappointment
Great so far. Just read 5 chaps and I'm already hooked. Author-san your truly gifted. I'm not usually thriller, murder stories but now I'm looking forward to the next update. Hat off to you dear sir.
how old is Lorraine if she is already ten yes in relationship with Mark and how come she be a friend with 23 trs old Noelle. absurd!
Very very very very very good
Refreshing n light hearted story. Nice!
more than 10 please
Very enjoyable read!
This book is awesome. I'm itching for the next update though!
