this type of trash genre novels are still being made . just stop putting trash in Trail novels .
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One of the first mafia novels I have ever read so if I say some stupid stuff I am sorry
First off, writing quality. Fair warning I am not very privy to small details when I am reading. So far (33 chapters) the writing quality has been great. Little to no mistakes (that I noticed) and even the small mistakes that I spotted (like two) barely affected my reading so great job there author! Five stars
Updating stability- Just started reading today so no idea about this.
Story development- Over the course of the story, many interesting events continued to happen and the actions the mc and other charcters took were very interesting and kept me very engaged. Again very well executed author. Five stars
Character design- I would go into detail about all the little things that I liked but that would spoil the story so I won’t. However I will say that the challenges and things that head towards the mc and how it develops not only him but the people around him is very pleasing to read. Five stars
World background- Since we are only 33 chapters in and the world seems very much based on the real world (which makes sense really) no complaints here. Not only that but the way the world is slowly developed alongside the mc’s life and escapades make the story so much more interesting since you never know what new thing will show up next. Five stars
All in all, a very interesting and pleasing story to rear with its own charm perfectly executed. Also the way the author showcases the intelligence and cunning of the mc and his skills as a mafia leader is very well done amking the story that much more exciting. 10/10
Last and final point, Nero cause Nero. Nero approves.
how do I start this one...
Guess I could go with, the story is about a tribe in a possibly alternative version of the past earth (why only possibly is cause we have no idea what life was genuinely like back then, only little tid-bits where understood) during the middle of the stone age. when you look at it from the point of view of a modern life, you see something too out of place. overall 10/10... just needs a bit of refining and a little bit of extra world building, and it will be perfect
Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !!
Author please continue .. ... ...
i usually don't write reviews but this book deserves it.
the writing quality unlike what others said so in the other reviews is kind of meh. now I am not an author nor is my English any better but I believe the author needs an editor because sometimes it's hard to read and you have to rearrange sentences to make any Sence of them.
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story wise it's really fking good. its the usual medieval fantasy with magic. MC is a regressore, someone who was little above a mob in his past life now using what he knows about the future to his advantage. the MC is likable and smart (not some aizen LV genius mind you)..all in all its a good story and I recommend it to anyone reading this review it won't disappoint you
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Love the story so far. Fan Zhong just wants to live with little white. The guy must be posting somewhere else to have a backlog.
Needs more commas lol
The writing quality is great nothing wrong with that. Everything is perfect so far and I hope that perfectness stays forever. I love the plot— heck I’m jealous by how good it is. Keep working hard author, this is a potential one can’t deny.
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so far I have nothing critical to complain about. it is so far a fun read.
This is one of the best masterpieces I have read until now. The story is slow-paced but that's the most interesting part of the story as it gives enough depth to the characters and world development.I'm afraid that most of the audience on the web novel is more interested in fast-paced stories with cheat abilities. I hope people will give this novel a chance as it will not disappoint.