"Teng Long," Hazel called quite naturally, for she enjoyed addressing the man as himself rather than her old childhood friend. "You are lucky the East king received your personality well. From what I heard, you were hanging on to your life by a thread on the battle against Third Prince Jun."
Prince-- Prince thought of having a picnic? My prince prepared these things?
"27 times."
I went outside and saw the long line of this years 10-year-olds. We all went at the same time to make it easier for people in the army all to come at one time. When the line of children went past I had to join the end of the line. People kept joining until we were in the centre square where we had to try and bend the fire that was in the middle.
"What are these things !? Hello !? Is there anyone!?" I shouted with all my strength, but somehow I could not hear my own voice, but in my head, I could hear a very loud and clear cry, my own voice, which scared me and started hitting the glass tube repeatedly, but the glass did not showed signs that it was breaking.
Okay so let me just say—this opening is a masterclass in stacking dramatic stakes. Chapter 1 drops the pregnancy reveal like a nuclear bomb, and then immediately layers on the divorce complication. Yu Yue just found out she's pregnant from a mysterious man, and oh by the way, her marriage of convenience is finally about to dissolve. The timing is chef's kiss. What I love is how the plot doesn't just give us one big twist—it gives us a whole cascade. First, the weight gain mystery (which turns out to be pregnancy, cleverly disguised as a health scare). Then the backstory dump about the marriage arrangement, which explains SO much about why Yu Yue is in this position. The fortune-telling, the kidney transplant, the three-year contract marriage—this is all woven in naturally through dialogue with Lin Lan rather than feeling like an info-dump. And then Chapter 2 hits us with Fu Jingyan's return. Right when Yu Yue is trying to figure out her next move, the man she's divorcing walks back into her life. Classic timing, and I'm already theorizing about whether the mysterious man from the bar is actually Fu Jingyan or someone else entirely. The author is playing with dramatic irony beautifully here—we know Yu Yue is confused about the voice similarity, but the reader is left wondering too. The bar incident flashback is also well-structured. It's revealed in pieces: first we know something happened, then we get the full scene. This pacing keeps tension high because we're always a step behind Yu Yue's own realization. One thing I'm curious about: the drug in her drink. Was that an accident or was someone trying to hurt her? The text mentions three shady men chasing her, but the tampering feels deliberate. I have a feeling this isn't over. Also, the fact that Fu Jingyan signed the divorce agreement and then disappeared? That's not just a plot device—that's character-revealing behavior. He's running away from responsibility, which makes Yu Yue's decision to keep the baby even more powerful. She's choosing to face things head-on while he bolts.
"I said, are you a virgin?"
5 years later....
I was confused whether to go or not but my curiosity got the better of me. So I decided to go to the Central Park. She was already there waiting for me, she was wearing the dress I bought her and that made me smile but that smile didn't last long when I got closer to her I noticed her mounds and her tits that were visible underneath her outfit.
Blood poured, as the glory of paradise slowly disappears behind the edge of the world.
The dots connected and he understood what had transpired.
Sebelum beranjak dari tempat duduk lock, datang sosok Xephan dari balik bayangan untuk melaporkan situasi.