Only 20 chapters out, but so far it's good. My main issue is....where are the triplets? The one he contracted doesn't seem to have any sisters.
umm author nim can u post the whole chapter here plzzz
Story is great (world setting, char development, etc). But what makes it shiiiiiity for me is Cuz of translators behavior. First he censored chap 801 sexual content(and he demand of $5 USD to allow a access of half champ of sexual content). OK I get it, it's probably qudians demand to censor sexual content, but can you not been greedy to pay $5. Fuk you could have just linked it for free (as we are already paying premum [10+ spirt stone]) or just keep your ****ty mouth shut. But noooo you had to comment more on chapter 803 or 804 about how it's only for real supporter. Bitch ain't I pay for your ****ty premum chapter? LOL, we all saw your hungry greedy ass and you put chap 801 on, Cuz all people saw your true color. They pay you spirt stone , and vote for you to allow it to be top 10, Are they not the real supporter? Good Job (greed kills)
-English is not my main language, so be aware of my grammar.
As I made a review on the Lord's Empire, I'll do the same here. A short one
-A better version of the two stories that were transferred from GT, it's like their noble first born son or something. Here's to hoping they'll transfer Records of the Human Emperor as well.
From the first 20 chapter, this is the only interesting trial read novel this week, pretty good translation, no gender mix up, name not mixed up.
If you don't mind reading a slow-paced novel, this one is for you. You might get bored of the first 50 chaps but you have to get used to it since it will continue until the end. The world building is interesting and i like that MC is into a alchemist and a dedicated one. Well i recommend this novel for people who have too much time in their hands since this novel will be a heck boring as you read more because of the slow-pace.
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Nice novel yeah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Funny enough and a true harem.
Maaaannnnnn love this sh*t hehehehehehehehehehehehhehehhehhehehehhehehhehehhehehehehhehehehhehehehehehhehehehhehehehehehehehehehehheehehehehehehehehehehehhehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.
if only there weren't so many mistakes with Grammer then maybe I could get myself to read more of this. sadly, Grammer is a major part for me and this story doesn't clear the bar.
Author here, finally decided to start and try making a novel and see how that goes
This is my first "book", will be spending what free time I can get my hands on to prepare the materials and write chapters or ideas. Though sadly my free time isn't that much so I apologize if the release is not regular.
I would like to have everyone who reads to give me any and all feedback, negative or positive, so I can see different Point of Views and perhaps better myself in writing.
Thanks for reading and I can't wait to read any comments or reviews you guys have! :)
-Vandaren