I'm actually being generous, this novel is like it was written by a 10 year old. You can barely read it and it's like a copy of all the novel's of the same type. but worse, the author needs an editor so that this novel can be slightly readable.
i think its boring, also what is the point of making the mc's class need 10 times more xp to level up if the author is going to give him an 10x xp boost immediately after anyways. If you like OP and fast growing mc and don't mind low quality writing you can consider reading it.
So we are now paying premium stones for wrong and wait for it... duplicate chapters now!?
what a way to scam your readers.
this should not even been premium with the way its going.. we are wasting stones and the translator has the nerve to upload duplicate chapters today..
I have really enjoyed reading this book. I hope you will resume updating the story soon.
As for the editing, make things easy on yourself and partner with a volunteer or hired editor. Even professional writers use another set of eyes to catch their errors and make constructive suggestions for the flow of the story.
This is an excellent work. Please continue developing the story, characters and plot. And, don’t forget to come back with new chapters!
Author buddy i think you should stop writing this novel too and try improving your writng skills and logic even more.the charecters of the people are too shallow, almost one dimensional.and if there are immortals in that world this idiot selling things like cleansing elixir as a weakling will only result in those immortals kidnapping him,torturing him,getting info from him,then finally dissecting his brain to look for abnormalities.and your world background is terrible.i hope you can atleast reach the minimum standards of a proper author by the time of your next novel if you dont give up by then.Goodluck.
Lol, the premise is interesting, wonder what will she do later and what excuse will mc give?
If only they could release some chapters to see whether it's worth reading or not.
Please Bring back this master piece!!!!!!! It's so good, the story gets so good! WHY YOU SO EVIL!
Please Bring back this master piece!!!!!!! It's so good, the story gets so good! WHY YOU SO EVIL!
i must say quite the 'touching' story. my emotions 'flared up' while reading. so, i have to keep my 'pulse' 'stable' by gritting my teeth and read it fully. it was'nt easy to control my 'risen' emotions.
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I'm a ****** minded person. As long as think I can read this novel without much difficulty and the story met my type of humor, I will rate it highly.
I hope he wins the war and ends up controlling everything. But I'm worried about that devouring domain demon. What if he ends up becoming a puppet after all and gets controlled by that thing? What about his supposed friends and allies will they still support him? I mean its human nature to fear and hate the unknown ur things you dont understand. I hope he will be alright.
love the story. Even though it's short I love the plot and the way the characters are constructed. Would love to read more of the work so will be waiting for updates.
The synopsis looked interesting but I can't be sure how the book really would be.. so I started reading it and yep.. this is a good story alright... just go for it.. keep up the good work author..