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For a Webnovel translation the quality of this story so far has shocked me with real story, world building, background, and character design that go past any other translation I’ve read so far
Seems to me that you have a pretty nice list of things that should happen to the MC. But you don’t really have much to connect it and make it flow.Ex. You created and killed a character in 2-3 chapters just to give John his cheat.For other readers, this should be a read for those who just want to see a Op character screwing around with common sense. Purely for comedy and fun laughs
Well i am writing this review purely due to my love for league. I have read other similar novel and haven't been satisfied due to my familiarity to game and the professional league ... I hope this novel will be better than the predecessor novel and finally i can boost up ma rank to diamond (untill now plat is my threshhold????)
I don’t agree with the whole sharing stats is stupid thing. Eventually someone will find out and with how ruthless the information sharing is in this universe somebody’s gonna know later on even if he doesn’t tell. Besides it actually helps him for everyone to know bc if they know how powerful he is they will stay away and his guild has to try harder to keep him
hey I go in the story but I did like it at first but it just got frustrating sorry it was a good story something the mc does just leave me frustrated
I can't believe I read this trash until chapter 35. ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
mediocre at bestsigh the story simply put is go around offend everyone or everyone offends himtherefore they die, im not even joking that is literally all this story is. the cultivation scheme is the worst ive seen in any novel spoiler there was a half step stage that was the same is its regular stage.
Alright - so having read up to ch 573 thus far I can't not make a review to warn everyone at this point, I'll keep it simple.Up to chapter ~180 the quality of the novel and translation is fine. It was a fun read, nothing too special but not resorting to much of the usual cliches. Up to that point I'd give the story ~4.3 stars.Chapters ~180 to ~350 the story, character and world development take a huge hit. Cliches abound everywhere, MC constantly going from place to place saving **** and people praising the MC way too f'in much for anyone's taste. I'd give the story about 2.8 stars in these chapters.After ch ~350 the translation starts taking a huge hit along with the writing quality taking even bigger hit than before so I'll sum it up like this - This novel is written by an illiterate 12 year old writing his first book and translated by someone who's so f'in bored and tired of this **** that he/she/they seem no better than the author either. I'd not give it any stars if I could honestly. Its complete garbage at this point and if you really have to read it I recommend reading machine translation from start to finish in that case - you'd at least have some semblance of consistency rather than an inconsistent drop in quality of just about everything in this novel.And here's a sum of verbal face-slapping arguments past ch 350:MC: "So you can do that but I can't do that?"Enemy: "My pappy is stronger than your pappy!"MC: "Oh so you can say that but I can't say that?"Enemy: "Omg let's fight to the death!"Nobody:Everyone: "MC is the son of god and he's so amazing and everything he does is so good and amazing and also good and amazing too! Did we forget to mention how good and amazing he is?! Omg let's praise him into the next chapter!11!!!1!!!"
Reading the first 39 chapters.The main character transmigrates into another world with martial artist techniques. Not cultivators, but more like pugilists.He gets a system that's from the game he used to play before he transmigrated and is capable of making automatons to fight for him. So far there has only been the MC taking over gang territory to plunder resources in order to expand his automaton army.There are no side characters with much presence so far and it seems like the MC will be going solo, without in-depth interactions for thetime being. The only side characters are his underlings and they don't get much character depth other than being his subordinates. He quickly becomes a powerful force within the city he's in using the power of the automatons, so there isn't much struggle for him so far.He's not a genius martial artist who quickly levels up, although he does use lots of supplements like pills to increase his own power quickly. Overall, it has an interesting plot, the system looks good so far, and it quickly paces through the build up faze, although If you don't like fast paced novels then you probably won't like it much. Hoping this turns out worthwhile and that there are more interaction between the MC and side characters to add more depth to the story rather than it being only about plundering resources to expand his army.
It's about a guy who gets a prince charming system.... sigh, he's suddenly bad arse after being mediocre because he was too lazy to exercise. He's suddenly a Mary Sue, with a halo..... its just not my cup of tea.
nice and heart touching story. enthusiasm for the author who always presents extraordinary stories. and also interesting to follow. Cheers bro