I like this story. Got hooked very quickly. My one critique is there is an over use of “…voice barely a whisper.”
Another masterpiece, I really enjoy your novels. The FL Character development and her growth, from her previous life to current ite very intriguing. The Story crasp you from the first chapter. Loving family life, plus the occasional failed schemes. So Far the story touches on War, suspense, Historical genre, Assassin, Transmigration, Strong ML FL, Mystery, Martial Arts Supportive Family. I wonder what more is in store for us, looking forward, Thank you Author Sorahana, love your books ❤??
Why does the story has no Updating Stability. It's been Five Days since last update...Some of the characters are also not with the flow of story. Like AI who suddenly one day wants to be in a relationship with her creater, etc.
It was an OK novel and I wish you would post more, but sadly I think you have given up on this novel! Good by author! I need a bit more. A little more.
from my point of view it's very good.Plot of the story is good and makes people anxious to want to know what will happen in the next chapters.Please help by supporting the novel
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As an author, I sincerely appreciate you for taking out some valuable minutes of your life to read this web novel.Designing the main character Xi Ansel was really fun. It took an astounding amount of efforts. He is humorous, ruthless, values friendship, smart etc.Even I am excited to see how the story unfolds :)
good job author the plot is well written and I also like detective stories, I can't judge using just one chapter but the synopsis is well written. I am eagerly waiting for new chapter. keep up and good luck !
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I see “f*ck” a lot of times ? I’m not very good at giving reviews but I enjoy what I’m reading and I hope that you’ll continue writing well.
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