The writing so far has been good as of chapter 7 and I have been enjoying the story a lot. Its lore is interesting so far with still a lot of unanswered questions that I look forward to seeing. The antagonist currently (Serpent Deceit/Anguis) is very interesting for the first villain of the novel. The pacing has been really good! It’s not too fast and not too slow which makes reading this much easier for me than most novels. The two main characters aren’t too generic or cliched and the side characters are also cool. Loving it so far. Keep cooking ?
keep it up hopes this attracts more readers
Amazing book I like the story line You are doing amazing work author keep it up
Hello i would like to just thank for the book but mainly i have a wish. Can you find someone who can correct your english mistakes? As for why i am asking. The book is easily readable but there are mistakes like an in wrong place and words are in wrong order. It hurts a little when i see it. So thats why! (I could propably try to correct some of it if you want. But you would have to respond within like 2 - 3 days max)
Announcement: Hi guys author's here. I already deleted and redoing all the chapters of this book making it more slow paced. Thank you for the support guys <3
I recommend this book to the apocalypse theme readera
Writing this review to let you all understand what happened. I was away due to my line of duty and had to stop writing for two whole years. After I came back, I decided to continue my dream of writing. So, after thinking about it, I decided to rewrite the entire 2nd volume. As for how the novel is, I will let you all be the judge of it after reading the first volume. Just go easy on me as it was written when I was fairly new and had no experience. The second volume will be a dramatic shift in everything from quality to quantity. I hope you all can enjoy it.And as always... Have a fantastic day and happy reading. Love you all.
So far each chapter has been a necessary part of the story and I’m loving it! ❤️?
is it just me or is this sounding suspiciously like Eminence in Shadow next youll tell me his ultimate move is "I Am Atomic"
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Good so far. I have finished the free chapters and still can't really form an opinion before the they leave the first floor, which is where I think the free chapters should have ended, but you can't get everything you want
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