stat Kecerdasan dari awal sudah 46 (tinggi) tapi kenapa karakternya terlihat begitu bodohnya??
kalau menurut karakternya, tidak pantas mendapat stat 46.
Story has an interesting take on the game elements and the characters have been given more development than the average Chinese xianxia, but the story can get a bit annoying at times when things aren't properly explained. My biggest gripe, however, is the frequent spelling and grammar mistakes. Some of these should be easily caught with a basic word processor, but many others are homophones or just similar sounding words that are not at all related. If these were infrequent I wouldn't mind so much, but they often occur several times a chapter or even multiple times in a sentence to the point it becomes illegible. Going over some of these earlier chapters to fix these mistakes would probably be a good idea to retain new readers.
This is definitely an interesting read, the main story isn't anything insane, but the way it's told makes you quite interested in learning more about it. Definitely would suggest a read.
For the love of God please don't add any romance or harem. That would ruin the story.....................Btw great work, keep going, new take on fiction and I like it.
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the story of this novel is good and the background is fantastic
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Bruh this is so underrated, considering how good it is.
Actually its pretty good, at least i read till 200 chapter and was above average...i mean not the best but idea pretty good... Not that boring and hes only lazy in others think... Hes hiding hes power cuze otherwise he would die.... He read novels so.... ?? Hes careful, but helping hes disclipes everywhere.... And etc, really i enjoyed reading this
I really enjoy this novel, it's one of my newest novels in my Library but it's become a solid novel that I actually look forward to reading. Sometimes there are some strange mistakes in some of the chapters, where blanks sometimes show up. But it doesn't bother the entire story all that much.
[4.6 because I enjoy this, but it's not exactly perfect all the time.]
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So far so good, at chapter 5 you can already feel the arrival of another Chu and Chen Feng from MGA and Everlasting.
It's got the wuxia flavour of a kid who magically gets has some more happen to him and then he becomes a murdering psycho with incredible cultivation speed and "great" morals.