@ chapter 69
This story has enchanted me, everything about it. The MC doesn't seem op at all and instead just seems to be ****** an amazing foundation through hard work.
A very sad 2/5 for its spark of originality. The MC is supposed to be like one of the primordial Gods in a newly made world. But he starts from 0 cultivation and has knowledge of the future like all other gods, but this futere can be altered. Confused?
I dare say you will never meet a more INCONSISTENT novel ever. The time intervals are completely irrelevant. By chapter 2 the MC has cultivated for milions of years and then after many other years goes to impart cultivation techniques to the ordinary creatures which do not really know what its like. BUT in just 10000 years these commoners which have no preordained knowledge or countless treasure like the MC does, they achieve a jigher realm than the MC. This is just an example from myriad.
The author just dumps a lot of random lore, impossible to remember or see the bigger picture. And the translotors, which are average at best, just translate it robotically. Lots of terms that are not explained is really annoying.
For MC character, utterly illogical. An otaku apparently which magically transforms and becomes the most productive guy ever, because we k ow otakus are very hardworking. He cultivates for milions of years but still always thinks of his previous 0.000001% life on Earth. No character interaction whatsoever.
This novel it is honestly pure sh1t, so don't give it a chance.
What do really expect from this type of story? If it was really good the author would be in a New York apartment going over all his movie and merchandising agreements not writing on Webnovel. That said it's good for what it is.
Best Game based story on WebNovel. A Mage that uses Magic revolutionary.
A good novel, writing quality is excellent. But I would say a bit more world background would make the novel a very good choice. Over all, a new novel that would catch your attention very fast.
spoiler wives....
Wen Jing
Xu Muyan
Qin Yunhan
Mu Zhaozhao
Song Zhenyu
Tang Bingyun
Yang Jingwan
Qiu Qianwei
Ji Shuiyao
Bu Feiyan
Liu Yue
Bian Suwen
Shao Wanwan
Luo Qingqian
Zuoqiu Chenyu
Zuoqiu Luoyan
Feng Xuansu
Ning Aoxue
Lu Yan
Tantai Yaoyue
Yu Shiqing
Song Zhihui
Mu Nanzhi
Jiang Yoona
Fang Youruo
Yang Zhixia
Qin Huaimeng
Ye Wuhen
Gu Hongyi
Xu Qingtong
Xu Qingxuan
Hua Jieyu
Hua Feixuan
Jiang Qingkui
Yan Ling'er
Ling Duanya
Qin Yaoluo
I really like the novel it has a different out look in cultivation world and is not guy reincarnated in another body that was trash but now he will be a genius he is a genius the moment he becomes a cultivator not in the mind tho just a genius in cultivation.
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A lot of authors write something like: Hey shameless author here im rating my book 5 stars blablabla. Sorry to disappoint I'm not shameless (i think) it's called promotion, and i do really believe my book deserves 5 stars, if you agree or think otherwise do leave your comment, i will read them all be it good or bad, i appreciate every critique, flaming on the other hand is ill advised, i can use voodoo so beware :creepygrin:
I do hope you all enjoy this book as much as i enjoyed writting it!
Nice story....
Keep the chapters coming___
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this book is darker than the authors other work but it's still written equally as well. the characters feel real, with real motivations.
please read because it is an excellent book
400 chapters in
this is the first time i read an idiot omniscient lol.
Great book with professional quality story line, very well describing the world and character, and still very reading friendly, easily 5 stars.