I will now be posting on Monday Wednesday and Friday I am not being lazy I am writing everyday but I don’ want to stress to much on chapters and provide the best I can thanks for all the support in the form of cries even tho I doubt ya are real but if you are [click here to make sure ur not a robot: power stones]:
Absolute amazing story, I'm still shocked that this book is this underrated. The plotline and the style of writing is great. The stability of the updates is really good as well. Keep it up author!
I shall be honest this was difficult to actually read due to the grammar errors but as that was already covered I shall move on. Whilst I am no writer myself I shall give you some of my thoughts. Try to be more consistent with numbers you start with mid 2500-2627 then you state the exact range 2580-2627 (which is late 2500's not middle). Also use the units of measure for example years. " and it was technology from 2600." could be and it was technology from the year 2600. or it was technology from the 27th century. It helps clarify when you have multiple unit types. examples are stats, damage or time.To help with grammar you could try "Grammarly" I have not used it myself but its supposed to be free so at worst you decide it doesn't suit you. Let me know if this helped ill check it again in a few days and see how the story is going.
There is no cover, why is there no cover! Anyway, I read it and it seems to be kind of action packed. However, there is not enough chapters! Moar! needs 140 characters... 140 140 140.
I love it!!!Keep up the good work author!Please upload more??????????☺☺☺☺☺☺?????????????☺?????????☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
I hope the author writes more novels like this. It's a light hearted wholesome book. I personally don't like novels that are overly romantic or about detailed violence and crime.
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Good book here 5 stars for you to keep up with the work
I have mixed feelings about the writing, I am on ch 9 and I don't think I understand half of everything I read, because although it looks like good grammar it is deceptively bad, it's structured weird and mistakes are in places where if you read out loud its just wrong, I can't gloss over mistakes in writing, I'm not that kind of reader, the dialogue and quips mc says most of the time I have to read 6 times over to make sure I understood what he was saying, but other than that every character I've seen has a distinct personality, the world although not told in much detail, is very big, and things seem to be happening though I don't understand it
The author needs to go back and fix his early chapters. He promises that MC improves later but it is of no use if a new reader gets too frustrated with Mc's lack of IQ. MC behaves like a retard and rages on the system like a Karen. There is no character development over the 90 days of training and the MC is still the same. He is confused about cultivation and reincarnation but later says that he is familiar with reincarnation novels. After he took a long time to understand stat points(which I will come back to) he is still confused about Skill points. How difficult is it to understand? He also impulsively decides to dump stat points in one stat just to get out. Why is he in a hurry to get out? What if there is danger outside like how the system mentioned? After getting outside he again ranges on the system for not replying to him when the system clearly said that it is updating. This was too stupid for me to continue.Please tell me that he is suffering from a debuff on his IQ due to his young master title because otherwise, his stupidness will be hard to explain. Don't say that he is new to the world and in shock. Shock lasts only for a short time, he should be able to adapt faster as a self-proclaimed nerd, plus it has been 90 days. The main reason I quit is because a reader who has read ahead said in the comments that this character and behaviour of MC persists for many more early chapters.
So far i can tell this book will be a gem and i cant wait for more chapters that will appear in future. Keep up the good work Zhayne ??????
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