hey a few thing i would like in the story. Just know im not telling how to write your book this is just my wants.
1.i don't see a need for romance I think I just doesn't fit the feel the story has.
2.i like the way your writing the book it has a show don't tell kinda thing going on.
Ngl I didn't expected much from this kind of premise but you did a good job delivering the story. Also tbth I think this one is better than your first book, you're improving and I, who has read both of your works, love to see you developing so great job.
The characters' are still being introduced but I like Sam, he gives me Klaus vibes from the originals and I f'king love it!
The world is being set up and you're doing a good job keeping your readers guessing.
I don't have much to say about development right now but I think the story is heading somewhere, somewhere I would like to see so good luck writing.
There aren't many villain stories. I mean there are story about bad guys, but not villains you know, the kind of people you'd love to read about but hate to meet in real life, Sam is that kind of villain.
He calls his murder 'hunt', he talks to the dead body of people that he had killed. He is twisted in the head and I like it so good luck writing him.
4.8 stars for now, I will recommend this to some of my friends too.
I know it probably won't get picked but I think it is good enough to get picked.
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Interesting Story, but the grammar and English is too broken to read. If the fixed the language and made it readable it would be a good read.
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I like this novel very much, but the update is not really good.
I am so very tiring of reading the works of authors who abandons their readers by not finishing their work. NOTE TO WEBNOVEL: A work is not "COMPLETED" JUST BECAUSE AN AUTHOR STOPS SUBMITTING NEW CHAPTERS. pLEASE ADD A NEW CATEGORY "abandoned" TO WARN READERS.
The book started out decently and just got worse and worse as it went along. The relationships and the comedy just feel forced. The mc waisted all his time during a six year time skip resulting in no progression. The mc also doesn’t use his points properly making it quite frustrating
I'm still not reading this but I will either way review this book for now. I will change this review later and will have an appropriate comment on this book.
Really good read and was very interesting up until about chapter 50. When you get to chapter 50 you see a little bit of the chapter and then on the author's note at the end that it's a preview chapter and the rest of the chapter will be updated by the end of the day. From the comments on chapter 50 it's been about 2 months since anything was done to that particular chapter. So while this is a very interesting and really good book there's really nothing else to read because the author is not actually finishing updating the preview chapters as claimed. Also all the chapters after chapter 50 are the same as chapter 50 a preview and nothing more.