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I have not read many novels from this site, but this one has left me very impressed. I am currently at chapter 142, despite the tracker placing me at Ch 0. Lets first quickly go over what this novel is not:This is not a battle filled 'I must become stronger' novel, if you had any such illusion after reading the description, please discard that notion.So what is this novel? Slice of life/romance is as close I can get, with some drama mixed in.It is a story about the lives of a group of people who meet in a game and become friends, and maybe more. The things they do in the game are there to show aspects of personality and to tell you their actual life stories, they are not the true focus of the story. I find it very refreshing to find a VR themed novel taking its time to develop a story outside the virtual world, while inside the virtual world. Additionally, considering its value in a broader sense than just the entertainment industry. VR is already used to train in a number of skills, there are certainly medical applications such as recovering from mental trauma.The writing quality is outstanding with few to no repetitions or overused words. I also admire the dedication in not writing specific things and letting the reader figure it out alone. Thank you, author, for your confidence in your readers. We want to be teased, we want hints and allusions, we want sudden surprises that cause what came before to suddenly make sense. It is much harder to write like that, so my respect for the story so far.The character design is good. There are few flat characters and those are the 'villager A' types. Recurring characters have complex personalities. Not complex as in hard to understand, but complex as in not having just one reaction pattern. A meek person gets snappy when stressed and tired and a shy person can get surprisingly playful and assertive when around people (s)he trusts.The only minus points are in the world building. The real world, the game world and the 'rules' of the game are mostly left alone. I do appreciate the points mentioned before, acknowledging that VR wouldn't be used for 'only' entertainment. You can have a job interview in VR. The story could play 'anywhere'... well as long as it snows in the area. At this point I have no idea if Danika is living in a big or a small city, what the area is like and I finally found out there is a sort of janitor/caretaker! (I'd have to look back for it to find the exact word and I'm too lazy). The game world is similarly vague with parts added/explored as needs for the story. I think it is absolutely fine for what the story seems to aim for, but it does mean I cant give it a full score.This has gotten slightly longer than I intended. I will now enjoy the rest of the novel until I am caught up with the current update.
I must say I only read 11 chapters bevore I am dropping it. So everyone can and should judge for themselves.Now to the review Overall it is nothing new the mc gets reincarnated as a npc in a game and was very powerful in his last life Inside the game. It also strongly capitalises on this so that it is mentioned nearly each chapter at the very least once. The mc has some pretty strong plotarmor, zb. he gets Upgrade Materials for no reason from his enemy or finds a dead horse 2 meters outside of town which he can use as a mount. There is also no real basic worldbuilding so we know that he is in a town and that there are some unknown Organisations and Towns. we also don't know anything much about classes or euipmentqualities usw. Overall it is about 1-2 Stars for me the 2.6 Stars in the review are vor update stability that csnt comment in.
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I literally only read like three pages and the grammar was so ba di checked if it was an original by someone learning English. Because, you know, I can at least understand that.But no. This is a paid translation.Not worth. Get an editor, or a better translator.I'd honestly be better off with MTL, in my opinion. It'd probably be the same quality but the words would get translated exactly.
Realy realy boring!I quit after the first chapter and i finish it with great difficulty.I dont think to continue to read this novel, i like other style of writhing the story.
I loved this novel, but the ending was hella sad. the romance is truly adorable, the fighting is interesting, and the world building is good. but the ending is too sad, so if you don't like tragic endings stop reading before chapter 622 that's all I'll say.
I am a fan if cultivation and gaming system novels and i have a pretty easy going judgement i never gave a novel les than 2 stars in 2years of reading but this one is a huge disgrace in all ways there is no character build except for the MC the comedy is so poor all the action is sooo poor the story is **** I thought first that it have a lot of potential but all went to the drain this novel i sooooo bad for any type of readers and I recommend getting as far as possible from it The translation is not bad sorry for the score but I couldn’t go with it sorry my friend and u did a great work
Good story content and everything. But story became very dramatic and some parts are very useless girls are like prostitutes who just go for money
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I havent actually read any of this authors particular Version of this book, however i have seen this story released by 2 others following the same plot (the gold in the house, the famous painting, etc.) and it was a decent story. The only issue with the others is that they all dropped it around chapter 30 or 40.
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