The setting of this world is very decent especially this novel takes place in Eastern Fantasy, interesting and unique. Also the characters in this novel is also good too, so good job Author.
I'm not going to go too in-detail for this novel, just because theres not a whole lot to write about.
First, theres a lack of detail in pretty much everything, and that kills the novel considering it's a slice-of-life. This includes the food, the era, descriptions of characters, and the setting in general. I really don't know how any of these characters look.
Second, theres nothing here to make you stay. The main character is a history buff who cooks good food and makes good wine. Thats all we know about him. The King visits him in his bar to ask various questions, and considers him a sage. He never says anything too shocking, but for some reason all the people around him treat him like a God. These are things that would've been resolved if the King paid more attention, but whatever.
Overall, this novel is rather barebones and once the novelty wears off, it becomes rather boring.
English is good. Even if it is not good, it's sufficient.
This is my favorite genre, yet, I still stopped reading half way through .
First, divide paragraphs. If it's this blocky on PC for me, I could imagine how unbearable it will look to mobile users.
It's fine to leave two lines of gap between paragraphs. it looks alright.
The story progression is good, keep at it, it will work out well.
Amazing nightmare concept!!! How you got this interesting concept? Keep on updating new chapters as the story seems interesting and can get a huge success. Best wishes.
Amazing... the writing is smooth!! how the author Discription is well written and easy to understand. I was hook at the first chapter. The is pacing is good. I could feel Marco pain.
bro continue this novel it has potential and also it will surely make you popular. all things are good if you add plot twists.
concept to earn by cleaning is a unique way of thinking in novels.
if you are reading this then think about it.
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Love love love me a book from Jordan Silver!!!! I've read all your books and can't say there is one I don't love.I especially love how these recent ones bring in the other characters from other books like Lyon and Gabriel (two of my favorite guys and read over and over again)! Hot sexy alpha dudes are a way to my heart for sure. I will say sometimes it seems like the chapters repeat themselves meaning the characters say the same thing but a little different with a word or two but that's ok cause I love reading your stories and fantasize having my own alpha take over. Great read and please don't wait to long for the continuing of this story. Can't wait!!
Too fast paced .. Not suitable for those who like world building ?...I can't even give low star review cause it may be deleted seeing the vast amount of 5 star reviews
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first time i see something so bad in my life, all this story doenst seem to have any sense the didnt give anything out he is so plain sadly...........
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