MC terlalu idiot, tidak sesusai caracter.
Cerita bukan Tag Villain tetapi lebih ke Tag Anti-Pahlawan.
Ngga ada kesadaran diri, padahal udah tau keadaan masa depan tetapi tidak dimanfaatkan.
Pengalaman MC prolog berhasil membunuh raja binatang abadi harusnya ada pengalaman selama itu tetapi di cerita MC terlalu idioit seakan tidak ada pengalaman sama sekali
It's alright not really that good but i liked it
i quite like this story. i like that the mc is actually smart and not the fake smart some are. i like that the mc is somewhat weak to strong, and took a interesting way to abuse his knowledge of the future.
Huft, truly disappointing. Just say u can continue to update a new chapter, but how about the other reader who new to this. do they have to buy it in Amazon. Amazing plan tho. ^^b
Oh really????
There can only be 1 cat in this world and that's me
ROAR! The Fatcat strikes back!!!!
Alright, back to reading thanks for the new novel
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Is it just me or Shi Hao’s innocent trait changing to shameless one happened too fast?
I was reading it and i loved how the little guy, even though he lost his supreme bone and everything he deserves, He still manged to retain his pure heart, forgiving attitude and innocent thinking thats why the Deity Tree liked him but then after a few chapters he suddenly turned into a shameless, lustful and revenge-seeking devilish brat.
I was really surprised when it happened, i thought i skipped some chapters or something.
Shi hao didnt harass the first batch of girls that came into the story Unlike the latter ones. In fact he was portrayed as a pure and innocent little guy and when girls come they adore him as a cute and innocent child but then after travelling,he somehow changed and every girl he sees gets harassed verbally. You know the fatty(boobs and butt) thingy. Like he wants to bring a girl to his village and raise her to be a fatty so that he can have his favorite milk and have a baby.
i dont see the reason how he became like that. Is it puberty? I mean he didnt encounter a seducing woman or something to trigger that change right?
I loved the innocent shi hao and shameless shi hao im not against it or something, in fact i love it but at least give a reason or event that justifies his traits turning into a different one.
Anyway its a good story!! ❤️ If you love OP shotas then you gotta read this!!
This book gets more interesting as you read and understand the characters background and personalities the book does not give the support characters a one sentence introduction this makes it a lot more interesting as it does not only on the mc and ml but on other characters as well giving it a good plot development.
You already know how shameless I am.
Thank you for reading I know this is not my best work but I'll do my best.
Extra chapters for powerstones:
50 - 2 chapters
100 - 5 chapters
200 - 15 chapters
The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this.
Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site.
The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something.
This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.
Amazing fantasy! I entered into his world
Hello, everyone. Giving the first five-star review to my book cuz, why not? And also cause I believe in it too.
Anyway, let me tell you a bit about the book itself...or rather a few things to expect;
> Mc will have character growth, so he ain't perfect from the start.
> Mc has the advantage of having read many cultivation novels. That should give you a hint of how that could help him