DeraBlue
4.8 stars. So. The only reason i saw this was because it was on free today. And then when saw the title, i thought it was a cultivation novel. But after reading the first few parts of the synopsis i was basically hooked. Even though it's not odd to find sao references anymore, it's really a twist since now the entire world has to play. Im expecting great things. But not too great that I'll stop using fp on other novels. Sorry. ?
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Es la mejor novela que hay sobre el fútbol. Buena trama y bien representados los talentos de los jugadores.?⚽️?———————////—///////////————//////////////———————————-//———-
After reading till the latest (chapter 14) this I conclude that it was worth my time reading this. Although the author needs to nitpick some mishaps on the chaps. Slight edits will make it perfect. The Story was a mix of past and present scenes and also some scenes are portraying first-person narration and there are also some chaps with third-person narrations. Anyways, regardless they were enjoyable to read. The characters were round as he was not cardboard cutouts. Making mistakes were what makes this novel to spice up. Hope more chapters to come in the future. You got me hooked and invested. Hidden gem! Five stars!
This novel is absolutely amazing. World Background:From what I read so far (up to ch60), there is an organization called S.H.I.E.L.D, said superpowers in the synopsis, people with superpowers in a few years time (from current timeline), and a super-rich playboy (Tony Stark?), therefore I presume this novel is within the Marvel universe. Character Design:This character respects his family considering he removed a Mexican cartel just to make sure they won't get back at him. (Typical mc, kind to friends and family and ruthless to enemies)Similar to mystical journey in terms of stat points. (Adding in one stat point would increase that attribute by around 23% or something)The system used is pretty basic, stats, abilities that can be purchased from defeated enemies, using credits that are gained from defeated enemies. Translation Quality:From what I read so far, there is no flaws.Overall, this novel is fu*ken fantastic. Hope webnovel, translates this novel.
Here is my honest and detailed review:Personal opinion: This book is unique and I recommend it to everyone who likes to read about magic. I can already see character development in the future, unique magic spells and a lot more. This book is speaking to me. Telling me details without even reading about them. It's amazing. Writing Quality: I'm hungarian so I can't tell much.... That's what I would say about average novels with good writing style, but this novel is unique. Even I can tell that the writing quality is good. The author knows his/her way with the words. Story Development: A very good paced story. This is almost like magic to me. As if the author had all the time in the world to think about the story. Only 14 chapters and a lot of things happened, yet the story is not rushed at all. Character Design: It's really colorful. Author gave us almost enough character details. We can imagine the characters, but we can also depend on our minds. Every significant character got a personality here. Update Stability: Currently 7/week. Not the best, but it's not bad either. The novel is good so I'm already thankful.World Background: I can't say much about this one. It's interesting, a mix of imagination and real world. It's a bit hard to explain. Read the novel and you will understand. I won't say much because the novel only started 2 weeks ago.(Currently only 14 chapters. This an early review. I hope the author keeps up the good work. Also, I hope this review helped you understand a bit more about this novel.)
This story is kind of similar the one i read into other apps called SAGO the name story is THE GOD OF WAR BACK FROM THE DEAD. anyways I'm gonna keep reading this one, i love this kind of story though..
good story, worth the read, there's no ntr as all that's happened is the gf cheating and fooling him and him realising he was played and lost a lot of money... the second harem member is someone he ensured would stay dependent and devoted to himself so the endgoal was reached, be she a virgin or not.
amazing...
I like your story please update soon
Wow.... nice story
Does he find out that Elva is technically hef niece
