It starts a little slow but is overall a good read. It ends up being quite funny and hard to put down. Although in parts it does get a bit repetitive but I think the author has sorted out their storyline more now.
Overall it’s a big thumbs up
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so far the story is good and I like reading it.
I hope there is more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapters
The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌
Guys this novel is literally on the level of a printed novel the character development is flawless its a bit darker than most novels you will encounter but it really drags out that excitement and on edge feeling cause you just worry about mc and the character are so well fleshed that everything they do has a reason and everyone has a motive where its not simply that they are dicks so the villains have an amazing depth to them that makes you understand them instead of simply hate them for their actions and if you like game of thrones you should give this a try from the way its developing i think courtyard politics is gonna be important and its not gonna be like normal novels where politics is important for two seconds before they just go back to survival of the fittest and mc just has a silver tongue and flawless analytical ability you need to give this a read if youre a fan of well written stories
As I read this, I thought that the slime was gonna be OP at the start but it turns out it isn't. I hope the slime will get more powerful as the story progresses on, but surely slowly.
The storyline is unique and good, but the imprecise and lengthy writing sometimes leaves readers confused. The character portrayal is not in-depth enough, but chapter 1 is interesting to read and needs improvement in the writing. Keep up the good work author!
Great so far - keep it up! Loved the plot and character build! Can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapters!! Thank you for sharing!!!
It's interesting though. A guy gets a system that helps him do well with school, including the social aspects. Truly a unique find.
I'm disappointed to see this one go, it was and had potential. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Finally she came back I was going to die because of the important wait It would be annoying if Sophie was against Azurath you'd better be with him and John would be annoying too But out of emotion that someone goes back in time doesn't mean this is a time ramification I mean you have to know when Azurath was imprisoned and explain whether the writer will touch on the multiple crisis with that I think it would be annoying if he brought it in because it would be annoying because there will always be another possibility of going back in time but on the other hand shouldn't Azurath come back too because he has mastered the law of fate and space and maybe time too if he does not mean that he will see them as prophecies for the future that's what we'll see in the chapters Well What's wrong with waiting?
This provided excellent narration so that I always knew what was going on in the story, I enjoyed the author's use of laying out the scenes and scenery and at the end I wishing for more to read ,this was well done.