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This novel is inferior to other novels,just an opinion for the time being likely to say that this need a efficient imagination inorder to have a quality essentialy to readers.
this is really awesome, are you going to continue mings journey in that other world?
I really like the character development and all the character s he gathers into his faction. I wish you would update morr often though.** I like your avatar of Bam
I like the background of the actions , also giving the side characters the lead is something really interesting , keep going author ........
This is not a story. This is a wish fulfillment report of someone who played an MMO and lost so bad that they wrote a report where everything is going well for them. MC is bland af. Meant to only be a blank slate for readers to slot themselves inEverything is reported intellectually monotonous. Even if there are ”human reactions” from the chats, it seems lifeless. Good world building so far though. Chapter 33 and i havent noticed any preset rules being violated yet.
need more chapters more chps exp exp exp exp I love it I want a little more romance but I'm loving it ??
Honestly a fairly decent book. Translation quality is decent as well as the Character and story development. My only gripe is that the last 20 chapters feel very rushed. Other than that a great read.
The dialogue in this chapter is absolutely razor-sharp and I have so many favorite lines. Let me start with Xiao Fuguang's opening move—"Mother, Sister-in-law, are you trying to wrong me to death?" Choked with sobs, sure, but that line is calculated. She immediately flips the script from accused to victim, and the crowd eats it up. Then there's Gu Chuan, who's basically losing his mind throughout this whole scene. His dialogue shifts from authoritative ("Guards, seize him immediately") to desperate ("Xiao Fuguang, have you gone mad?") to outright threatening ("I will make sure you die, along with the entire Xiao family"). You can hear the panic cracking through his words. And Zhuang Linan—oh man, her dialogue is pure performance. "A woman's reputation is more important than anything" followed immediately by trying to manipulate Xiao Fuguang into not believing the letter? The hypocrisy is almost impressive. But the real standout is Lin Fan. This guy barely speaks and when he does, it cuts deep. "Who could have imagined they would actually commit such an ethically unforgivable act!" He's not just exposing them—he's painting them as monsters in front of the entire court. The dialogue between characters feels natural too. No one sounds like they're reading from a script. Even the crowd murmurs feel authentic—"This Miss Xiao is truly pitiful" and "Ah, the Gu family is truly unfortunate." The author gives each character a distinct voice, and that's not easy to do in a scene this crowded.
I love this
Please continue with the children's story. Loved it!