terrible editing terrible editing terrible editing terrible editing.You can barely tell what is happening in a chapter due to editing.terrible editing
The storyline is so interesting ,I love the way it begins and the title of the book...I can't wait for more, I'm sure this is going to be fascinating
I’ve read about 150 chapters so far so I feel I can talk about this book. The first 50 good translation, logic, consistent use of characters and world building is also good. After 75+ it all goes down hill translation gets worse by the chapter, for a good story I would read mtl translations even if I would to make up my own conclusions to understand what is being said but this is not worth it here’s why.There’s nothing special about the main character he’s own of those who keeps a low profile and sometimes shows his power but that’s it. His struggle for power or reason to cultivate almost becomes obsolete because of his panel. Meaning there’s much struggle making him boring. There’s always a need enemy or a new young master who appears out of thin air it’s like the world building is made on the fly to accommodate the current story . Power scaling is all over the place worse than dbz at this point. His strongest move atleast his strongest move for the past 100 chapters has been his floating daggers. Not only do they not use any qi consumption they are only medium grade but because they come as a set they are able to basically contend with weaker top grade weapons, higher than high grade. Which he got as a 5-6 as qi cultivator I forget. But still uses them to kill 9qi peak ??? Also he always seem to be richer and smarter than everybody else even richer than those who are the holy sons of sects with sect masters 3 realms higher than his own. Example: his sect has a gold core as sect master. Another character saintness of a sect has a level 5 major realm the spirit transformation realm but yet she never uses talismans in a secret realm but he does (they could But i don’t care anymore ) anyways it doesn’t make sense in that secret realm he is with other people with similar status and yet he is only doing something everyone else should do it’s stupid.
The novel lacked depth in character development and the plot felt predictable. It failed to engage me emotionally or intellectually, leaving me disappointed overall
What captivated me in this story is the title itself. When I first read the first chapters, it was interesting and it hooked me until I realized that I kept scrolling and scrolling. Overall, I'm looking forward to development of this story. This is a must read! ??
an interesting story, because apart from the neat grammar, the character development and the world are very good, besides this story is also addictive. Keep up the good work author!!! ??????
"The reason why he walks like that is probably because he hurt his back which made him walk like that?" June felt a little bad for Keres but got happy when she thought of the possibility that he was around her age. Don continued to be in deep thought.
I really do like the story, but the writing has made this novel very questionable. The author decides to bring religion in to this (Not made up but actual religion from irl) and he states he wants to being Judaism into it for how ot can help the story and how he has no bias, bit this turns out to be a complete lie. In a few of the chapters he mentions how Jews are struggling to live in Jerusalem and how Palestine and all the Muslim countries are out to kill them but this is simply false. First off, to anyone who has read the news about this area, would easily be able to find out that Isarel has control over Palestinian and are attacking civilians and forcing them to move with violence. Palestinians are under threat by Israeli forces and not the other way around. Also many Muslim countries have good relations with Isarel and have struck deals benefiting Israel. There shouldn't be any reason to claim all muslim countries want to kill Jews because that's just made up by the author. It's not difficult to find this info so unless the author decided to write without any knowledge of the area it only seems possible he's doing this intentionally to put Muslims in a negative light. I have nothing against talking about religion but racism and lying about a group of people to make them look bad is not acceptable.
I've followed every iteration of this novel, and every time you post, i come back. awesome work!
sorry if the update is slow, there were some problems recently, I'll fix it soon
intriguing plot, interesting characters. The writing style is good, flaws and typos here and there but nobody's perfect. I love how the story is going so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters! author is very generous and spoiling us with publishing so many chapters in a day❤keep up the good work
Glad this book is here hopefully it gets regular updates I think the highest chapter iv seen translated is in the early 200s elsewhere thou hope you catch up quickly and dont go premium to early if ever.