I like the concept of multiple modes where players can try to be not just Adventures but even Wild Beasts or Bosses and many more. Hope it gets picked.
The Book is good but translator is bad, the translated chapters feel like the translator never played games before and many terms were wrong. Chapter 9 n 10 are the same. Much Amateur mistakes.
Author when will you release the latest it's already been a month..this is just the cup of my tea novel and i dont have anything to read yet..so please release a chapter alredy..
Sincerely yours,
#1#2#3 Abid Reader
extremely good content and more interesting
WTF author? I removed this from my library years ago hoping to come back and read it after it had more chapters, tf is this? are you a snail? do you have less time than time has time? What's with you? are you having problems at home? do you require assistance? can I interest you in my windowless room with a computer for you to slave away and finish this book? I promise to feed you three meals a day.
such a good book, with WN picking up bunches of older novels I hope this gets picked up too
The only Achilles heel of this gem is that there are only 5 chapters, apart from that this is really good.
That we would be happier with 10 chapters?
That is also true.
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Kind of a nice indulging Plot, I would say the writer should change the book cover and use a attractive one.
Overall- it's just a suggestion, attention is all we need.[img=update]
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If the idea is to be judged here this piece would get 5* easily. Unfortunately, bad grammar makes the reading experience almost unbearable. Use of personal pronouns is wrong and that is a reason why the story is so so so confusing at times.
Tbh it is hard to say something to story and character development and design. Focus while reading is simply somewhere else.
If you are able to overlook grammar, spelling and word mistakes and errors (!!) then this one could be a gem for you.
If you are annoyed by a shit to of mistakes and errors (again!!!) please do yourself a favor and avoid this piece at any cost.