Will this be picked again? Contrary to garbage novels that are translated nowadays, such good novel like this was dropped... shame; please pick it up...
Owes me a refund for having a double chapter, otherwise worth a read if you like the genre..................................................
Novel about gamedev industry. Not very realistic. System actually did nothing, except that it gave the hero some money to start his company. At most System is just like virtual accountant. MC really needs to fail, but thanks to circumstances, he always success. It is very interesting to watch his efforts, you know that they are doomed, but you do not understand why. And when this happens, you always feel some kind of childish delight, as if for the first time you see a magician.
Better be overgeared . Its a proper gaming novel instead i would say story could be better. You may like it for begginer
The first 15 chapters are exactly the same as Path of the Flying Sword. Which to say, within the first chapter the transmigrated Mc started to think like a retarded local. This is the kind of story that makes you thankful that The Strongest System and Ultimate Scheming System exists.
Every character in this novel is stupid.Is everyone character here to be a comedian? Isn't MC suposed to push the story forward? So why is he so pasive?Why is he not questioning things that don't match his knowladge? Why does he look down on him self because he is a "mortal"?
This novel is one of the worst novels i have ever read...MC of this novel is annoying sentimental idiot with Hero syndrome....---------------
MC is plain stupid, for some one who lived an entire life before migrating timelines. Most of the situations feel forced just to fit the cliches. Dropping this for now, probably will check back after a few hundred chapters (or not) if the story improves.Would not recommend this.
I had a whole proper review written out for this but decided to just backspace all of it away. I'm going to say what I want here, not as a review, but as advice.Firstly, where's the synopsis? The only reason I clicked on this was that the title pretty much said it all, but without a decent synopsis, lots of people are just going to skim past it.Your writing style is confusing and could use some work. The best advice I can give is for you to read some of the well-known stories on this platform and take note of how they do certain things, such as how exactly the character speak and what the follow-up text is for it, the rough estimate length of a paragraph, the background of characters, and so forth.The formatting could use some work. The "paragraphs" are far too long.Additional information should go to the additional information section, not in the middle of a chapter. That's the biggest problem of this story so far. Work a bit more on the characters as well. Like, make a character sheet of every character and give them like 20 characteristics, traits, abilities, personality types, etc that make them unique. Don't introduce most of these traits into the story directly, but rather take a roundabout approach. An example of a fairly well-structured paragraph with decent vocabulary that helps portray some of the characteristics of Zach:'Despite Zach's prior fear when he learned about the foundation kidnapping him, a blooming sense of excitement welled up from his' depths after realizing where exactly he was; Inside of the very SCP Foundation that he respected! The idea of being able to use his omniscient-like knowledge to explore The Foundation would have been a rather thrilling one if only the guards weren't holding him at gunpoint; His anxiety well on its way back to cloud his judgment once again.' Other than those main pointers, there are a few things here and there that could use working on, but they aren't detrimental to the story. Just focus on getting a better writing style and fixing the formatting first.~Some guy who cried after reading SCP-1762.
Gary stu MC. Gets everything handed to him on a silver platter. Growth is too fast. Author constantly contradicts himself and the MC consistently just makes the most nonsensical decisions. Author frequently has to nerf the character .
A great novel so far with many details, though it has quite a bit of info dumps it sets up the background of the world pretty nicely without stopping it's progress for more than 1 or 2 chapters at a time.So far it has a 'pure' motive behind it, no evil constantly breathing on MC's neck or some kind of revenge, just pure enthusiasm and determination which I like a lot
Fantastic book