KiritoK5
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Really love how the fights were written. It's clear and well described. It's not confusing. Great first chapter. Keep up the good work. I’m sure we’ll find out more about the world soon enough. Only complaint, the book cover and the story feels like it didn't match that well
I hope one day we have a novel and it’s short name is THOT. That would be so funny. Oo Oo. Oo Oo
I really wish I enjoyed this story more than I do. But the pacing, poor grammer and sentence srructure deters from an overall good story.?????????
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Super rushed with no plot whatsoever , it feels like reading a roughly skimmed journalThere is no connection to the characters or the world,It feels like reading a bunch of random words and it makes no sense.In conclusion I DO NOT RECOMMEND.
it's a year old with 50 chapters tf?bbbbbbbbb
I think this has potential but this main character is so annoying and perverted I just want to kill so maybe actually make a likeable character that not trash.
Another Faloo Novel that's all and most of the time they are only 25% the same as the raws lol
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *), then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
Nice job man. Story begins with a battle royale. It's fluent, I did not get lost in battles. I'll add more comments within next chapters but i thought it's deserved a good review even for now. This is the first story which i applied 5starts for all categories. I hope it'll go on like this.
It’s good,very good.Light,realistic with a rational mc, to my taste.So please do not drop it and keep the regular update( you can also have rest.. ??)
