"Virus is my slave"
Wutdeheeeeellll
Chapter 101 for a while now started with the same old Bullshit of rivers of blood and mountains of corpses, boring old shit, killing a woman by ripping her head off in a none life and death arena (she said not to sound him before the right no tucking enmity) and consuming her blood while saying they do the same to none sentient beasts... Sigh.IAlso a weird fixation on a 9year old 'american' girl.
An interesting story with lots going on. I particularly like that the main story arc never gets bogged down with excess filler and the author manages to keep the story well paced and interesting
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The story and plot is decent the story flow is okay update decent translation ok hehe best of the best.
I really don't know what should I write well it's a good novel.
Writing Quality 4/5: Good word diversisty and well structured sentences, the reader won't struggle here. There are however a few minor typo's every few chapter that are probably due to autocorrect. I.E: Brian becomes brain.
Story Development 4.5/5: The story focuses Mc's inventions/discoveries used for the betterment of others, be it individuals or entire communities. Something I'd like more of is POV's from different characters it's one thing to see the improvements of the Burtons via the MC another entirely from the POV of say a guard.
Character Design 4/5: The MC is too OP... Well that is sort of the point but I think I'd enjoy the story more if the MC had to work together with say Ceasar to perfect the manuals for the major heavenly laws.
In the end it feels as if other major characters in the story can never measure up to the MC.
Updating Stability 5/5: Seems to update frequently, I just binged nearly 300 chapters so I'll just leave 5/5.
World Background 4.5/5: Starts out as pretty standard xinxia fare I.E: eight kingdoms, 4 empires multiple planets. While you read the story however the book/novel takes the time to introduce dukes and the royal family from both the Mc's kingdom and foreign kingdoms.
I just love the novel of KinnPorche but for some reason I love Vegas and Pete story more then ever! thanks for writing both the novel and side story.
This story will pull you in quite forcefully
Very goo
good story I was enjoying it very much [img=Loving it] but recently I'm afraid l will drop it because it's looks like[img=disgusted][img=Speechless] Harem is growing 123 whyyyyyyyyyy ruin a good story it was going very well for me and everyone else please rethink [img=Envy]
I'm pretty sure if I was a cultivator is some ancient world, and a three year old starts speaking like an *****, is smarter than me, and knows all sorts of strange magics. I would kill him because demons obviously possessed him.
No fault to the translator, but I'm always give a low rating to Heaven Defying Toddlers.
Excellent story. No annoying harem, genuinely touching scenes, a narrative that connects with the reader, emotionally invested relationships and complex character portrayals that aren’t just caricatures. (Like our good friend Bangwan, for example... I’m surprisingly fond of him lol.) An unique/intriguing MC to follow and a plot that remains captivating without overdoing it. Honestly was close to tears at some points in this series. Add a dash of humor to flavor as well as some good old kickass and you have a great read. Minor plot holes, but I consider that rather insignificant in the overall read. One of the better written novels so far out on Qidian not merely as a wish fulfillment story - highly recommend & my compliments to the author + translation team on it.