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This is pretty good so far. There are a few things that should be fixed like; you don’t need to write out ALL the stats some is fine, the interactions between people do not seem natural and the characters have not really been described so it’s hard to picture what they look like. The characters should really be described better, I usually see some sort of movie in my head of what is going on but in this book that doesn’t really happen.
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This is my second novel,focused on superpowers and dark themes.Hope you will like it!The begining may look similar to Venom,but it's just the alien part,so no problem!
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is really good long story short the mc is op like from LoPE and i really like it.hope u release more chapters&add some cultivation levels like make some glorssoy that will be really helpful.thanks for the story my friend
A great novel, very happy to see it back in translation.The MC is very good, clever and not rash.The universe is interesting, and not as absurd as the one in some other xianxia, so it's a very good read.
Hey author, I have this power also, I'm able to tell if a novel is good with a single glance at the synopsis. Er... sorry, good luck on the next one.
So I will gonna rate this 5 star, I already read the previous novel and I like how this rewrite so far giving his mother a store maybe this will give different vibes from the siblings hahaha
It's a faced paced story and asks the question, "What would I do if I got bad news from the doctor?" K has a lot of potential as a leading character. Of course, if he doesn't slow down his actions will definitely catch up with him in a very brutal way.
not a bad novel..pretty good read..????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This novel is yet again another example of a novel with a story which could be developed and made into something interesting maybe even "slightly" different from the rest, however the cliche and culture that runs in these types of novels has ruined it. Our MC has spent 6 years IRL which is 12 years in game yet proceeds to get surprised by a level 5 enemy using a basic skill... He claims he killed an ancient dragon yet he can't kill a level 5 enemy with 0 brain cells. Continuing onward this novels MC has to be one of the most retarded ones ever, we all know that in most novels where MC has reincarnated or transmigrated with experience and future knowledge that they end up being dense but this novel takes it to a whole new level. 80% of the novel is the MC just repeating things such as "6 years of experience" or how the MC's sister will get ill and how nice she is, The author expects us to feel attached or to feel at all for the characters yet shoving this **** in our face is not the way to do it, you have the weave the emotions in not just state how we should feel. The novel's world background is also atrocious, at least in sense to the game as many things which even 10 year old kids would find common sense happened to be things that took people "2 years to realize and caused a big commotion"... that's basically saying that although we are nearly 100 years into the future with all this advanced technology (of which the understanding of should indicate the human race becoming more intelligent) that people can't think that maybe just maybe you can also be the evil guy in a quest like wtf. Also i understand that in novels somethings have to made so that the MC coincidentally finds this or in this case that he just happens to be lucky in his drops, however that needs to be in a more subtle way and in which the MC still faces challenges, i mean the predictability of this novel is just absurd an example is when he gets a belt with +15 HP and just so happens to need it to survive against the next guard he attacks or how after gaining the full set (which was also coincidentally gained after remembering some fucking genius gurus advice that there's two sides to every story and that you can be the evil guy) he has enough reputation to make the priest turn his back... The rest of the novel is just people exclaiming how MC must be some Rich 1st tester and how they are mysterious and shouldn't be offended (typical CN bull****) and "subtle" face-slapping. Overall the MC of this novel doesn't even begin to act like a veteran who was once one of the top 10 swordsmen should act, the flow of the story is just is stupid it's almost as if somebody was just thinking and writing no planning before hand and no editing as none of the names which should be capitalized are capitalized, about 50+ chapters are just wasted in the game and the real life world is only touched at the end with more BS in your face telling you how you should feel, after about 35 chapters i skim read most of it considering how everything was jut a useless info dump and repetition. I cannot begin to comprehend how people are rating novels like these with 5 stars and how always these kind of novels get selected through trial read and novels which are actually good and have a fresh perspective in webnovel like "Plague Doctor" actually get dropped.