This novel was very interesting to see it made my focous very bear, and I can give compliment for sure on thins work. I cheer you up and I can’t wait for new chapter to unfold.
Story is okay. Just not my cup of tea. The synopsis makes it seem like he becomes this OP villain and eventually pulls a badass goddess as a wife. In reality the Mc forces the goddess into a soul contract and is super weak. My guess is he won’t truly be a strong villain until the very end and I’m not really willing to wait that long, or spend the money on coins just for him to be slightly powerful. After his deal with the goddess he’s cursed into oblivion and no can no longer hold a weapon, learn spells/techniques, or control mana of any affinity. So we go from OP Mc to cursed Mc. It’s perhaps my least favorite way for authors to slow down power progression. You can slow growth without debuffing your character.
I hope author recover soon, and start to update this novel. I really like your novels.
guys please my other book didn't get a contract ? please show me support and critique on this please
This is my second book by this author and I'm loving every minute of it. You can tell they've learned a lot from their previous novels and this one really stands out in the world building and power system elements. Just shy of a hundred chapters in but nothing seems rushed with this one. It really is excellent!
Honestly was looking for a book in which the mc is overpowered and chill. And this is that book, although it has those cliche parts it’s still fun to read and not have to really think. I do hope the book expands on the world a bit more. Love it, don’t drop.
Take all this stone. You deserved them. Now let me just add this sentence to reach that limit.
This is my own novel but i feel like i should tell people what i think they can expect from me, so this is how i will do it:My writing is subpar early on but improved starting from chapter 13 and will stay consistantly good, but my update stability is bad, i believe that in worldbuilding im amazing though, so check that out :D
This story has a lot of potential, hope mc aspires to gain power and eternal life
That's a great way to start a book. Fill the first chapters with lots of intense scenes. I really got interested in this book. Definitely adding it to my collection. Good work Author.
This is the best romance I've ever read here. Update daily please
Self-promotion just to kickstart the review, lolAnyway 24 chapters in, so I'm gonna leave my shameless author review.For everyone who loves their romance dark and messy (in the best way), this one hits all the right spots. If you're like me and live for the 'I know I shouldn't but I can't help myself' trope, THIS IS YOUR BOOK! The boss is everything you want in a morally grey hero, and the chemistry with his mistress is whew! Fair warning: you might need a cold shower or three. Happy Reading