Intriguing and engaging, it'd be nice to see where the story goes. Nice development and magnificent suspense and transition within chapters.
Needed free pass so reviewed..
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Good start, with great prospective moving forward. The writing is excellent. The plot is interesting. The MC is relatable. The world at large can be explored, and I'm sure it will be as the story progresses.It's a slow paced 'weak to strong', so if that's your cup of tea, would recommend picking this up.
I only writing this for free pass (fp) .
Strangely I feel like one of the fairies in this story waiting for the author to drop some candy. jokes but really well written and thought out
I'm impressed how far u have come. I'm proud of u gng. I hope that I will continue to help u write until the end of this novel lol.
Great storyline and plot, keep it up author
"Wait let me guess," said Writerz.
Gin: Are you pissing me off?!
"Luffy-kun repeatedly asked me throughout our two year training trip, he would even wake me up in the night to ask me so I simply agreed to join to save myself the headache" Itachi said as the others laughed at the persistence of their captain. Robin then decides to speak about the events which transpired before their departure.
The woman started crying a little more and hugged me back. Really hard.