it's pretty good so far idk how it's gonna be later tho but as of right now I think it's worth reading
need the character limit hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I like it maybe this is why we read, and why in moments of darkness we return and enjoy the books: to find words for what we already know but new.
Woooooow what a nice story.
Kindly come with the next chapter early.
Whatever a man sow that's what he shall reap, let us all learn a good lesson from this story and our lives will be extraordinary.
God bless you.
So firstly I just wanna state that this is actually a good novel, could even be great. I have issues with a few things though. 1stly too much exposition, way too much exposition. This novel could actually benefit from breaking up and expanding the first few chapters to flush out more intricate details and better character development and such. I feel as though the Author loves this novel and has a great many ideas he wants to implement and it shows by coming off as if he's rushing the development of the story. There's a distinct difference between withholding information and slowly trickling it in after hooking the reader with great action beats and giving information dumps to get critical information out of the way. There are some grammar errors as well as spelling flaws, but by far the biggest issue is the exposition. Sometimes it even rips the reader out of immersion of the story. We gain information that could easily be told to us in more creative ways. Overall the author is creative and even though this is a systems novel, I feel they do a great job of utilizing it as a tool rather than the main focus. The main focus is the world, and there's thought put into this world, which is why the exposition drives me up a wall because you are taking away from truly expanding the beauty of the world. I know this may seem like a rant or bashing but I'm only being tough because you gotta gem here, slow down and polish that baby. If you establish that beginning right all that juicy tid bits i know your rushing to get to will pay off even more.
just like his other stories this one is nicely done as well. oddly though the more I read of this story the more I find self not really caring about the mc and the story itself. I am really interested in the other side, the people with the systems. is there any chance we could get a story from their side or maybe a new story. a story with systems with glyphs on people. idk this story is nicely done but for some reason does not hold my attention like your other stories have.
I like this story a lot and hopes it will be interesting in the future as well and be of more chapters
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Ero..... if I remember right he's also called cupid. Btw good novel.???????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Interesting Novel , keep working bro ...
Astonishing, very unique concept, I like the way you composed the book! The characters are well-written and nicely written situations, I must say this book is worth reading ☺️ Best of luck author such a nice job you have done, keep it up.
the story is good just hoping for author to continue this story and please update release more chapters
I really like this book and I would 100% totally support it. Great background, great character development, op system, I would read this again from beginning to end, like the romance overall one of the best novels I read so far. Author keep up with the work thank u.