The story is definitely good, keeps getting interesting chapter after another, well done ?? ? ? We want more updates, please keep writing ??
So far, so good! The story is written quite well, starting out with enough mystery and the proceeding with the 'beginning' of the actual events. Love the FL, she's adorable. I actually like it more when the ML is the one constantly frustrated tho. ?
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Gerald Fireborn, will he be able to return to Neloron? Will he be the one to destroy the BS Sect? Or, will the MB Sect Elders backstab/dissect him for their own gains? I want to know more! How his story will unfurl.
Tbh the story itself is fine. A chapter took many part but the contain is short, it is killing me. That make me didnt want to read anymore. Just take your time man to finish your chapter. I doubt there is 5k words.
Every word has a deep meaning. Very suspenseful sci-fi. I like this story. The author uses language that is quite easy for reader to understand. Fighting ?
Ill give three stars because the plot seemed fine but no matter how much I read, I barely understood what was happening and was utterly confused.
A very well thought out and executed book. Nothing feels forced and it has a very natural flow to it. I hope you keep going with this......
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This is an amazing story even though there are a few minor grammar errors. The story still reads well if you just ignore the errors though so it’s really good.
Good , apocalyptic world , system , not too op mc but still a genius good side characters, good prologue and this review is 140 characters short
Great story, with a pretty good writing quality. There aren't many grammatical errors in the writing from what I see. I'm interested in seeing how the mc will develop more as a character though. Sometimes he's just pure evil,which matches his past and later on, he starts to lose more of that caring side we see in the beginning. Hopefully we will see more of that later on. Anyways, I would recommend this story to those with an open mind and likes a good anti-hero because this mc doesn't give a damn and will sacrifice anyone, no matter the cost, in his rise to power. *Also he broke a seven-year-old's arm and killed the kid's family, early on in the story*.