TheDeathmail
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️
Honestly? This was really good. The pace was just right, something that many authors struggled with. The story building, the build up, the cliff hangers, everything was well written out. I hope I get to see more chapters from this author again! Good work!
Nice start for a story. It gets intense every time
The story captivates me, especially the main protagonists. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Right after chapter 40 everythings feels out of places it like my mind is having trouble processing the story it was too rush or poorly told
Im more invested to see how strong he really is compared to everyone else and when he will find out rather than anything else… this is Not something you read seriously or for the plot, it seems to be all misunderstandings and attempts at comedy
A novel inspired by Pokemon game, sure, let's see.
MC is a trainer that regressed from his previous life full of failure, ok.
Suddenly got the ability to evolve beasts by telling story.... wut? and all of them successfully evolved into OP beasts and become his loyal tamed beast? wut?
Did you input cheat codes when starting this new game? And you expect it would be interesting?
At least in Pokemon the MC starts from the bottom, and that what makes it exciting to play. The growth, the struggle, the adventure.
You simply toss all of that out the window.
Well ok, I'd throw this novel out the window too if I could.
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i have to say this, you have read this one.i am not a huge fan of cultivation yet i like this one because the plot is realy interesting .
how come anyone be not interested after reading the auxiliary chap, it hooked me right away.
i found it difficult for me to keep up with the chinese names, But it was not that big of deal, the mc' character is very deep and relatable.
give it a chance , you will enjoy it
great story plot and character now I'm just waiting for the next episode to drop hope it comes soon . translator or writer just keep doing you it's a great story so far
Absolutamente apaixonada pela história e personagens! Incrível! Obrigada por disponibilizar a história completa, já que a série produzida não conta nem a metade de toda história! Obrigada!
