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I really enjoyed the story and the concept of it it's like a whole bunch of anime i like mixed together the world is like the anime magi where they can explore and conquer dungeons for magical weapons and the mc is raised away from humans so he has that goku innocence that i love i really recommend it the only think i kinda didnt like is the power system but other than that everything else is perfect
Hello, I am fellow reader passing by. just saw came. I enjoyed this very first chapter. I know it's too early for a review. But came here to comment about this. Since still there is only one chap, I am not capable of describing the plot. Yet, Enjoyable. So I think the author will understand and don't get mad at me for this not well reviewed,review.
It's pretty good I hope you can mass release some chapters though cuz I really like it good job author-San more please.......................
what an amazing novel. love this and waiting for more, pls read as well. start is a bit cliche but try to stick with it
I find this novel enjoyable to read as the protagonist goes off to new adventures to gain power while finding ways to get stronger to complete his missions and defeating his enemies. It's has great genres for the story.
I read till chapter 8 and couldn't take it anymore. Here is the constructive criticism everyone in this website asks for if you give a novel 2 stars without a review (when clearly people are giving 5 stars without reading)
English: nice
Story: Not trying to be cliche but so totally cliche till chapter 8
Tournament plot, cultivation manuals, beauty takes interest cuz why not,
Strong to weak with some random cheat
Now here is a plot hole. (there are more but i don't wanna be too hard on the author since i think it is his first time writing lmao)
Apparently played the game for but doesn't know anything about the game except the power system (was he a fking slave in the game? He doesn't know fking anything except the history)
My disagreements.
Every character acts like a person from your typical wuxia novel.
Not gonna say anymore. Good luck. Bye bye.
it is really good. and I'm really enjoying the second arc.
I'm writing this second review after catching up to the latest chapter of 404. And my opinion on this series has improved! The slice of life elements are less overdone now and actually feel like they contribute to the character development rather than just being there for the sake of being cute or filler. I also appreciate that the main character and most of the side characters are pure good as a opposed to the chaotic good of most other Pancakeswitch protagonists. This also means that unlike most of them, the evolutions of the main characters of this novel are far more positive and good for the world and less demon lord/cosmic horror/eldritch abomination type evolutions and skills. There's nothing wrong oth that, we've just seen it done a lot in Pancakeswitch novels. It's a nice and welcome change of pace in my opinion. Also, despite the fact that this is one of those novels where the game eventually merges with reality, it doesn't go the typical route you've seen many times before. It's a gradual process and there's a lot of mystery as to why it is happening at all. Definitely check this one out!
Pretty good grammar for an unknown book, but the mc is quite stupid. He says he wants world domination, but he enrolls in an academy? Personally, I stopped reading there. He also gives the mc a human and devil body which he can switch between whenever he wants. Idk kinda seems like plot armor.
Just found out this amazing book have a free offer from Webnovel and after binge reading to 600th chapter, It's only now I realized that I haven't give All Five Stars yet.Shame on me, Here's your stars, Author!???⭐✨?✨⭐???
✅Logical school life
✅Good vampire progression
✅Interesting npcs
❌Short chapters (Author has other novels to write so its understandable.)
❌Ability system (Author didn't reveal much about it so I won't complain for now.)
❌MC couldn't accept his godsend power (Honestly I think his ignorance about him being a vampire after system told with so many ways is a little forced by the author. Well come on.. He doesn't live in cave and hunt mammoths for living every teenager has some fantasies about vampires theese days but of course he may think drinking blood for living is gross so I won't complain about it too.)
Overall it's a good read.
Title kind of reminds me of I am number four. I am yet to read a few chapters but what caught my eye it the book cover. If the author is reading this, is that art original? Thanks for noticing. :)
