I think this is a great book, even though it's in it's early stages. Imagining what the world and events in the world would look like is easy. At first, I thought the whole book might be a long battle of genders. I am pleasantly surprised that it was nothing like I expected, and I will be definitely awaiting all the chapters to come. :)
It's rather different from the author's other works thus far. The work It's most similar to would probably be Dance of the Cherry Blossoms in that it has less of a focus on powers and more on the characters. There's even a bit of ho-yay to boot, although not sure if this story will become a BL novel.
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Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable.The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl.Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't.Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps.All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid.3/5Keep it up lad!
Really good novel ur cooking author?? its definitely unique i really like it? the plot is great etc
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Good book enjoy it! Keep up the good work
Will do a mass release next next week. Its exam week so I won't be able to write as much but I have a stockpile of chapters.
I love how the plot unfolds, keeping me guessing and eager for more.
The novel is really good and story execution might be slow at the beginning 100 chs but after the pace catches up with by 150s.Now, let's get an overview of how the novel went till the latest I caught up withMost of you might seem to hate Damon (mc) in the beginning chapters but I don't see him annoying while he might be arrogant, sometimes overly confident but all these traits comes from his past experiences. He was like a lone wolf who knows to fight and has the will to go as far as he can to make things work but doesn't have the power back it up and can only lick his wounds at the end again this personality was shaped by his past.The charcters are complex each having a strong trait they believe in and they were not perfect which the novels shows everytime by their actions and they come to accept them as they experience reality as the story progresses. world building is really though we are yet to explore different places but I'm really looking forward to them.Just in case if people asks, his power comes with great price and sufferings. His actions were questionable but not without reasons and he grows as a character into fine person and accepts his regrets and moves on so that he won't do it again.Lastly, the story writing, pacing after few chapters AND fls are really good. Especially readers might the chemistry between Damon and fls ?
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