Hey that was actually a pretty fun readKeeps me waiting for more
It’s a good start and keeps the reader engaged. Kieran is unlikable and if it becomes too much revolving around the scheming love rival (Amelia) then it will become boring and cliche. At this point Kieran needs to start redeeming himself and the story will move more in the direction of trials they may face.
157 read. the hero has very, very, very small balls ... and the most useless character is vanessa. in addition to the promotion and the raid, it could (and even should) be left behind the scenes. and yes - there is too much "sugar" in the whole story))).
The story has an interesting premise.Waiting for more.
I read this on Asura scans …….. that’s all
this is perfect, a little gory maybe but perfect.every time when I thought, oh this is peak there is no way author can add more to this. then I read another chapter 10/10 boys if you are cool with mc doing creepy sh*t this is for you.
?very very very very very very very very very good workkkkk
The novel is very well written and I look forward to seeing where it goes
looks like a good book will be sure to read after I'm done with the current
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