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I'm not saying this is similar to Transcending marketing novel but the live stream concept bit similar .... MC grant by a livestream system and he shot the various animals and interesting topics to get stronger. This is bit crazy but story not bad, you should try this story and feel yourself!
i like the story from the beginning because it has a lot of potential to be great. mc is a dumb and a trusting and it is fine for me since other author tend to do it for Character development. It Started go haywire around 30+ Chapter that i was forced to drop it. suddenly killing innocent for no reason getting mad killing them and urging them to suicide. a sudden 180 degree turn around in attitude . i am not hook with the authors explanation since from the beginning he was introduced as a moraly upright person and it will take a lot for him to change like that . it was forced or the author lacked the right way to present to us readers that it does not click to me the right way and it irks me. Well according to his monologue he was told by the draconians that you gain power with contract souls . I cannot remember though it might be i have been skipping the other chapters since i am getting irritated to his stupidity or bored. Still i am putting this to library probably dropping it. reason? I am not quite sure how others see anti hero is but for me anti hero are those who still follow the HERO line but still has like a morality . it is hard to explain and there is a clear line for psychopath, psychotic or cold protagonist which i label them as Evil MC most of the time unless given an outstanding background or story execution.kudos though for very good world development and interesting way explaining the stats. there are other bad things such us being a little dumb, sudden change of mc attitude like being domineering as if he got mental issue. a little bit trusting and making very bad decisions. according to author this will improve and the product will be a cold hearted, vengeful and selfish protagonist . if that is your cup of tea i highly recommend it to you
I like the idea of the Mc being a necromantic summoner, and while I am a bit biased with summoning novels I truly like the story. and while the Mc looks and feels a lot like William he has his own characteristics that different him.
mc also has a terrible naming sense
but besides that good novel
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The story is just another face slapping story disguised as trying to be enlightening.
that is still fine but what I couldnt accept that for a monk that posses otherworldly power, still it coulndt escape the trope everyone is ganging up on china, and being racist to them.
if you want to read a story of a racist monk, here you go. a monk teaching that should transcend humanity made up patriotism and nationalism, a religion that about soemthing more than just race and even species become a story about a patriotic monk that only enlighten China. I guess Buddha only favor the chinese.
the earlier chapter is fine and I held hope for this story. but then come the mandatory korean or japan people being a dick and racist to chinese for some reason
This is a self mastubatory piece for China
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Dont even bother.
I read almost up to latest chapters around 500ish due to webnovel free novel deal, I gave it a shot.
At first MC is supposed to be a “dragon” yet sneaks around for no reason but because he is being overly cautious. I have no issues with that but then he has some fetish of using his women as bait for a particular scheme and let them get molested. Thats where I draw the bottom line.
You can hide, scheme and act. But there has to be a bottom line. Clearly the author is more interested in creating plot twists and schemes within schemes than making things make sense. Even a great schemer like Lelouch would never use his sister Nunally in his schemes. This work is a failed attempt at writing a scheming type of character yet having a strange dragon pride bloodline that doesnt match
Throughout the story, author loves showing how the MC acts stupid, wimpy etc to bait the enemies to attack etc. It repeats over and over. Then another common thing is for some reason his organisation has to clean house very often. Somehow ppl keep betraying his group.
Cliche cultivation seclusion scenes. Cliche wife kidnapping scenes. Nothing new here or done better.
Long monologues without any real story progression. MC powers up suddenly every 200chaps or so but somehow never levels up during time inbetween.
Dont bother.
The story proluge is good but please fix the skill usage like mp cool down and it takes to much time for the development to takes place make the story more details
You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed.
My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.
There isn't a single trial book worth the read (╥﹏╥) Is there any book you can recommend?