first of this is a great novel, you have made this novel interesting but too much future information is making the novel hard to read after knowing where he will end up with his powers, if it's like that how about making it short and not too long but interesting in every chapter so one reads it repeatedly and be satisfied rather make more chapters and bore the reader, but all in all this is a great novel i love the different system of power it's refreshing seeing and reading something new unlike all these other repetitive novels, don't drop it keep it up ??you deserve all the stars but it's to motivate you ?
I like the story so far, and I think that It has a great potential. I also like the points of view that we have, we get to know the world around the main character a lot more. Looking forward to more chapters. Best wishes for more chapters and a great novel that we all can enjoy.
Author, come back and write this novel. I will give you MY BODY AS COMPENSATION!!!! I lick the Author and beg for Moreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories.There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more! ?
So far I like how the story goes - Edward and Elizabeth love each other so much - I wonder what kind of twist is awaiting. Thank you for a very entertaining story ??
As soon as I read the topic I knew I was going to love this. AND I DID! after reading few chapters I was already hooked. The writing quality was just amazing, you left cliffhanger in this book so much that it was impossible not to read further. I am going to read this from the beginning till the end. Author don't be shy put some more chapters XD I am in so love with this book.
Really interesting with twist and turns, expressions are so good that makes me feel that Iam also part of the story, I enjoyed reading the chapters, waiting for upcoming chapters, and want to know more about killer and motto behind
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I really like it but its scaring me especially Jane sudden turned bad*** I mean freaky. Anyways, writing and storyflow is amazing. All you need to do is maintain a daily update and everything is perfect. Good luck! ?❤
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Me alegra que por fin volvieras, por favor no vayas a abandonar la novela, es muy buena, gran trabajo.Es una historia increíble.Alabadas sean las Yanderes.
Hello everyone and i hope everyone have a good holiday for incoming Christmas please follow the SOP too since the covid 19 are still going strong. Good luck and have a happy holiday.