I like reading this when i have extra time one my Hands and its really entertaining definitely recommend for people that have extra time on their hands or are just bored and this is the first 5 stars i give
This is too funny if you are someone who can read without taking things seriously you are guaranteed a good laugh this one made me tear up this needs to get picked!
Not to my taste. The start almost made me not read it. ... . . .. .... . .. . . . .. . . . .. . .. . . ..
Book is about a Mc in the World setting of modern day America who has been scammed by an institution in joining and then being left without any penny.... While wallowing in his sorrow he discovers an insect in an amber which and on breaking it gains an ability to see through the eyes of that insect as well as control its body to search for lost money and other treasures..... Looks like good to me...
One of a kind novel I read so far, it kinda like the mixture of Fullmetal Panic + Gintama and its not harem but kinda like have the possibility of becoming one. My point being.... I FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!
Oh. My these old men are too shameless and they are also displayin their shamelessness in front of their entire family. I have a hunch that ying is the son of general Lin from his missing wife or something like that, i just think that they are already with their biological biological family without knowing about it.
Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points.SPOILERS AHEAD***************************Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about.Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said.Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough.Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed.World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end.OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.
Great story. Also, it's by theOnionJunktion. POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO POTATO
This novel has a much better synopsis than the other one (soccer/football related) . I hope this gets published first.At the moment it's last in the race we need more supporters.
I doubt 99% of Chinese novels are written by AI ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
I really like the idea and concept of the novel so far up to which chapter I have read(278). Still there are a lot of inconsistencies in the novel. I feel. Firstly there are many unnecessary information in most of the chapters taking up a lot of unnecessary words which could be used somewhere else. Also, a proper world background is missing, with information here and there that does not make much sense. It is better to use an extra chapter before the novel begins like some novels here do, where they provide a general outlook to the whole world background. It will no doubt contain some spoilers but it will help the reader understand the world more.I suggest providing a chapter before the novel starts which consists of information regarding the power ranks and the levels they relate to. Also a chapter on the world background of the world the mc is in currently. It will help all readers going into the novel.I hope this suggestion maybe helpful a little.
Awesome novel. This one is a breath of fresh air without deviating too much from the norm. This is unlike other novels which claim to do something original only to produce sub par stories. Do yourself a favour and read it.