It's all about the first chapter pulling me in and I was pulled in fast! Doesn't happen often but very excited to see what happens. I love the view point really gives you all the feels and makes you feel like your right there seeing everything as well. Looking forward to seeing the rest. I really love it.
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I really like the way you described the ML as well as the background. One can easily imagine and feel this in their mind. The idea of the story is also good so keep going. I recommend others also to read it. A worth reading novel.????⭐
The pinnacle of Isekai comedy, never fails to make me laugh and somehow has an interesting story at the same time. (Its like Konosuba but with a different setting and approach, both are peak)
The premise is interesting and the story isn’t bad but what kills it for me is the grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting and refreshing introduction and progression of the story. Kinda reminds me of of the game "Life Is Strange". The flow is creative and fairly thrilling and the portrayal of the setting and the characters are put into heart and emotion.
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We all can agree that this novel is inspired from One Piece and that is what made this novel so interesting and fun to read. Expect that this would be the same as thinking if luffy have a system. So without a further ado, i will now start my review.Writing Quality: Superb... the author already have years worth of writing experience. If he has grammar mistakes, then it would mean that he didn't improve. So, you can expect to read a novel with little to no grammar mistakes.Story Development: Can already be guessed just from reading the synopsis. Think of it as luffy with a system but his parents were killed. But I gotta say, mc's past is same as Naruto.Character Design: Since author already have experience, he didn't make the mistake of making his characters like cardboards or one dimensional characters.Updating Stability: Author updates daily so expect that he can satiate your thirst for reading.World Background: 30% Land and 70% Water. What else did you expect?Overall: A must read. Author didn't info dump so it is an interesting and entertaining reading experience. But nothing is perfect so I wouldn't dare to give a five star review.
I like how you talk about the realm of life and death it caught my interest! It's amazing that people will have powers in the future. Wishing that I can live in that time.
not interested in reading past . the first chapter........ get it together writer...........plus the word count is to much on rating... thanks
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love it bro, it has potential,??......................................................................................................................................................................................................................