The story itself shows lots of promise... The execution of the story is poor. Many opportunities for good storytelling go ignored or get glossed over. If this is taken as a rough draft and got rewritten it has the potential to be a really good story. Just not in the state that it's in.
this was a great book at the beginning, but seriously it delved into a troupe , human in monster skin, no true world building, as we barely know much about it. then lest not talk about Anna, it's her story apparently ?. but moku our "Supposed MC" isn't really likable, but you don't hate him he's just boring & closed minded. then you all these forms with different ideologies & background that truly isn't necessary to explain them in such detail; too much trying to promote his culture with the naming sense (Author him/herself). levels & ranks are too complicated , & too much emphasis on moku's power , not necessarily moku himself as growth in character. no is he allowing his other Main Orcs get Character Development. Orcs being in shambles (Crying) because his brother died is blasphemy , they are Raging creatures where killing is second nature death of those near is nothing new , they knew this before moku even came to their world. these aren't Orcs , Not Monsters , but just Green Humans smh ? & please for the love of the readers who probably still read this , stop saying "Moku this Moku that each sentence. here's an example Moku looked up at his assailant, gauging the distance from which he could strike.Then he took a stance and activated his "Such & Such" form.
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Honest review!!Such a good plot.The synopsis is catchy.The writing style and the flow are so pleasing.The characters are so interesting.
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Nothing really happens 20 chapters in.
It's one of those novels that's not too bad, just bad.
Things in this novel up to now are written in a very unentertaining way, the mc wakes up, goes to school, talk with friends.. just like that, and with those events if I can call it that, nothing was written that really stood out for me. It's like the word "meh" was made solely to have a perfect description of this thing.
There are stuff better out there, yet why is this thing ranked at the top?
Character build-up and story development is pretty decent but the only problem is gauging the power of each stage in cultivation, difference is somewhat hard to understand :)
Wow it's simply amazing, the only thing I don't like is stability of updates
Deixando uma review BR de responsa, naquele pique, se outro BR tiver lendo, salve.
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I was about to read it but a lot of people in review be like there is NTR which i don't enjoy... And i don't see the author clarifying anything so i guess there really is.. so all the 5 star i see here are from people who enjoy NTR danm people have some weird fetishes out here.
The story is pretty good I like the plot of the story some really good stuff I think the writer is very talented and has a very good imagination.
The story is well written and the MC is well developed. If you can get past the first 3 chapters, its smooth reading from there. R-18 chapters are there, but aren't shoved down your throat excessively. Probably wasting a power stone here seeing as it looks like the author has dropped it, but it'll stay in my library just in case.