wow nyc i would waiting for new chapter
Hello I hope you all like this novel, this novel is not a normal sent to another world type I hope to make the world and characters come alive and yo be cared for so if I need to fix anything please leave a review thank you all
Good updating quality and writing quality. Story has an overflow where you can follow to a good degree. That being said some major cons are as follows. Authors lack of commenting back to multiple criticisms during the novel. Second would be the Mc personality shift. Goes from hardworking to goofing off. He is initially shown as hardworking and serious but now he acts like a total clown. Too much forced humor that ruined a lot of the novel. Mc also seems to be pushing more towards a hero/shonen type. Mc also makes numerous idiotic mistakes such as not even checking the market price before selling something. Keeps making dumb mistakes constantly and under utilizing the lotus. Had so much potiental but left with so much frustration.
"Yes, they need to eat well and sleep well," Bae Seoyeon agreed, "As an ARMY, I am proud that I stayed up last night for a ticket. And they sold out in 3 minutes. I am so proud of my boys."
Read the first chapter and I’m already hooked with the rest. So far, there are three main characters in your story, which makes it stand out already amongst others. I love the specific descriptions for each character, such as their heights. I feel like it adds context to how they deal with the things that surround them.
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nice and,perfect. you taste it seriously, cos you will love the perfection ❤️?
Hi there,I’m the author of this novel, and I’d love to hear your thoughts so far.Thank you for reading!
pretty good read so far, im interested to see what happens next. grammar and writing is good, especially when compared to most of this site. just please don't drop it!
Love the story and character development. The only misgiving I have is the lack of updates in past few months I really hope the author continues working on this amazing book.
Almost perfect except stability of updates. There is none whatsoever. Will binge read this one after a year, if I still remember it by then. Nonetheless, wonderful story.
I must say.. the author is talented and pls who else was overwhelmed with the first chapter... everything was in cold blood.. I can feel it but my question is how long will Kai keep hiding his powers