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The premise of the story is good, but to many adjectives are used for my tase. Every second sentence there is unnecessary adjectives added to the text.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Peak fiction honestly, it’s better than lotm
It is a nice story for a first timer! It was a little boring during the first and your suspense writing can be improved but keep growing ? I believe in you and very soon many will.....BTW can't wait for the second chapter ?
A very interesting story ????????????????????????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I LOVE NTR I LOVE NTR I LOVE NTR I LOVE NTR
apologies to the author ? just asking is there a Kendrick and drake in this novel ???
it got me hooked, (gosh, my brain is not braining) your book is easy to read, easy to follow, i mean, there's no need to criticize, and to be frank, more people will like this and it's not confusing. I love the writing style, so please, continue writing! more and more readers to come!
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
As this is my first novel, i am not surprised if the story starts off rough. But to those willing to be patient with me, you might discover your new favorite author.
I read up to chapter 165. He does everything by working hard. The system exists, but it is not exactly as we know it. There was a shortage of novels these days. I recommend you read it.