Look out the vigilantes are making their move! But awesome chapter cant wait to read the next one (I wonder what Hexens power is). [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
What is a Blue Eyes White Dragon doing there? Don’t tell me this is some sort of fan-fiction about a crossover between Yugioh and Pokemon.Other than that, he has already peaked at 9,999? Pathetic.
Nice story so far (Chapter 8 and ongoing). The only thing is minor mistakes and you seriously need an AUX chapter for these characters lol.
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Even though the story seems interesting, the grammar my boy.. Is just horrible. I tried multiple times but i couldn't move past it. Before dropping 500+ chapters you could have edited your first chapters. Bs.
Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.
Ok, thought this would be decent, but nope. Nothing. Cold garbage. There arent enough details, i dont get a picture of anything, and MC knows information we weren’t even told about at all. Sure, someone explains something vaguely to the MC, but we know absolutely nothing about what was explained. You would think that we ahould know something right?
The premise of the learning system isn’t exactly new, but it could have been interesting. Honestly though, these first 20 chapters are a nightmare. 1/3 to 1/2 chapters are repeated in the next chapter, there are also huge inconsistencies in the story, and there really isn’t any learning. He just gains complete knowledge as long as its a related subject. Disappointing.
The first novel on the webnovel site that I'm reading aside from the fact that the story is pretty slow going everything is fine.............
I read the sypnosis first and ''sell him as a guinea pig!'' made me want to read this book even more and i did, all 7 chps btw and it was interesting to see the MC journey, hope he succeeds in his personal mission.
Good book hope you don’t drop :). (I will now spam E’s for word/letter count) EEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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