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The "naive protagonist" part is just because he transmigrated from another world, just lack of knowledge at the beginning. . .
I could be wrong but it seems Chen Ming is one of the people that he gave the power to go to other worlds basically one of the people he gave a copy of his own powers too so we got to read the story of that person's experience but it was all very sudden and not explained very well and I don't see the benefit of this at all
A suggestion, I think if the title is shortened to 'The Second Chance of Youth' it would sound more catchy.
Until where I paused, the story hasn't given us any helpful clue but, I noticed the 'vampire' tag. Did it mean the MC was a vampire? That's why he looked youthful after almost a century?
Writing and grammar-wise, the author could do better with more practice. If you didn't do it, I recommend to have up to 10 chapters in drafts before publishing 1 chapter. It will help to reconstruct and solidify your storyline and ideas
Author you are a beast at writing harem novels that are actually good, thank you.
I'm leaving this review after paying for 10 chapters (chapter 60 to 70).
The translation quality is great up until you have to pay for the chapters. After the chapters are premium the grammar goes into the dirt. The free chapters are a lure, after you start paying, the translator gets lazy as f***. You would think that the quality would get better since we as readers are paying for a product, but no they are just phishing. Seriously the TL can go get bent. Just because you go premium doesnt mean you can get lazy and drop the quality to bare minimum. Although maybe there are some dumb people who will accept it, how many readers are you alienating because of the blatant money grab? Literally the first paid chapter is so much more substandard than the free ones that it is jarring to read. It has turned a story I was thinking about paying to read into one that I am warning anyone and everyone into staying away from.
Seriously stay away from this BS money grab, low class phishing scheme. I already wasted money by buying 10 chapters thinking the quality translation would continue. *Hint* It doesnt.
I have been following this story before it got into the official site,and there is a reason why this has me so hooked up. First off,the author. Feng Lian Tian Xia is someone whose works I really enjoy. They are often times very witty,and the comedic undertone really gets me. Regarding this series,this review is valid till chapter 290.
The MC is someone who got reborn in the body of someone with a common name. Pretty generic.But it is the relations that he maintains with this sudden family that he gets,which keeps you interested.We get some really good humor in the early parts of the story as well. And then of course come the antagonists,who are..kinda weak.No,they are not your generic antagonists.It is just that the way in which the MC beats them makes you feel that they are weak,when in reality we actually learn quite a bit about them.And they are not really weak.
This is a harem,no doubt.But,we have a female lead who was part of his past life.We get many characters from his past life appearing in this life of his.And this makes it very interesting,as he was a Monarch like character back then..and now he is just a weak guy from a lower realm. Till chapter 290,the world building is pretty much standard.There is a long way to go.
I would say,read it for the elements that manage to keep this afloat despite the fact that this series is on a similar chassis when compared to the other works of the author. This series is Mango approved!!
The transition quality is comically bad. It's just absolutely terrible. Half the time there are 5 extra the's in a sentence, the other half is missing word. The engrish here ruins this novel.
First I have to thank the author for the fantastic work. Your book is my every day highlight.
This book and its predecessors are a peace of its own. An MC who knows what he has to do and has a clear goal. The road he has to walk is long and burdensome. But every step he has to walk is essential for his goal. And I like it.
Thanks for your patience and time, dear author.
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Why does it need to be 40 characters long, I just wanna give the novel a rating.
The writing is very well. The world building is expectional with status on every enemy and action document the main characters. Would reccomended
